ACNOLOGIA IN MULTI VERSE

I need to give the writing quality on this one 3 stars. Though it diserves 2 stars due to the ammount of half ass spelled words like "Are, You, and Because " but other then writing quality, the story is good with a good plot idea

this is a good novel with a good plot and character the only bad thing was the writing quality like ig i didnt even know what that meant till i read the comments your a good author some novels ive read get pissed when someone reviews them seriously but you were cool about and even replied and agreed with them and the writing quality is getting better so your changing it this review will probably change to 5 star soon though

I like it

The concept is good. But the pace is fast. Un-Naturally so, a single arc is supposed to have 20 or so chaps ( and thats the shortest ) and please. This fanfiction is too straightforward and unrational. Its clear that he is not a tailed beast from his appearance alone. So why o why did he attack him? There's a lot of holes too. Base on the time line. Most of the biju especially The 9 tails hate their Jailers as they were suffering from their inside for hundreds of years. Your timeline is also wreck. So wrong. And you can't just ask for a mate, it must be slow especially the psychological backlash she got from her sons. Her clan betrayed her. Her husband and friends betrayed her. And her Childrens betrayed her. I wouldn't be surprised if she chase him away even if they were friends for years. And the Mc is childish. Please think carefully and research. The Idea is good but it was poorly executed. I saw small improvements but same can be said on your flaws. Hope you read this so you can do more good chapters. And I'll be blunt here. ( im not insulting you btw ) World building = 3/5 Characters including the side ones= 2.5/5 Grammar or Characterization = 3.5 / 5 Update = 4.5/5 Plot = 2 / 5

The writing is quite mediocre but yet an interesting plot, a character taken from an interesting manga with great potential and very little used. An entertaining fanfiction

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