I liked the first version better. this one is good but the first one was the right idea.
2 years ago
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SethKang
Author san when are u gonna update chapters of these novel , it been too long please update , this novel is best please update.
Pretty please update the chapters of this novel it will be shame to have such fantastic novel to be drop/hiatus please don't do this and resume this novel๐ฅบ๐ฅบ
3 years ago
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EreinSG
it's good story
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4 years ago
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MustafaMahmood
i really liked this fan-fic and the one before it so please don't drop
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4 years ago
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XIANJING
Lagi ๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ
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5 years ago
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zant_yangqq
good story I hope the writer doesn't drop this novel
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5 years ago
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Majeh7
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there's something to be said for being pinned to the bed
breasts pressed into the sheets
as friction works overtime
teasing & taunting
pebbling their peaks
your weight sensually resting from chest to thighs
a blanket of intensity
my legs slightly spread
and you tunneling deep inside
fully impaled
unable to move
every inch of me
focused on you
directed by you
my only range of motion
centered
at the depth of our connection
slow strokes
with murmurs in my ear
fingers tightly interlaced
your hover shadowing my face
building a gradual rhythm
as I feel pressure relentlessly increase
walls gently rippling
not knowing
which inward sinking will cause my undoing
have me arching my back
crying out & shuddering
begging you silently
baby, cum into me
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I liked the first version better. this one is good but the first one was the right idea.
Author san when are u gonna update chapters of these novel , it been too long please update , this novel is best please update. Pretty please update the chapters of this novel it will be shame to have such fantastic novel to be drop/hiatus please don't do this and resume this novel๐ฅบ๐ฅบ
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Lagi ๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ๐ค๐ค๐ฟ *
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there's something to be said for being pinned to the bed breasts pressed into the sheets as friction works overtime teasing & taunting pebbling their peaks your weight sensually resting from chest to thighs a blanket of intensity my legs slightly spread and you tunneling deep inside fully impaled unable to move every inch of me focused on you directed by you my only range of motion centered at the depth of our connection slow strokes with murmurs in my ear fingers tightly interlaced your hover shadowing my face building a gradual rhythm as I feel pressure relentlessly increase walls gently rippling not knowing which inward sinking will cause my undoing have me arching my back crying out & shuddering begging you silently baby, cum into me
Exp ๐๐๐ค๐๐ค๐๐๐คฃ๐๐ ๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐ค๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐ค๐๐๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐ค๐๐โบ๏ธ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐คฃ