well. Goood story. Different from previous story.
great. please update more please.well. Goood story. Different from previous story.
great. please update more please.well. Goood story. Different from previous story.
great. please update more please.
5 years ago
2
Connor_Stokes
I really like the concept and the plot, but the poor grammar, typos, incorrect words, and inconsistencies make this story hard to read. I have read all the chapters here and on the previous version. If you are like me and can read over/through the typos by mentally substituting the correct word, then you can get through this story. Even then the author could use a lot more time Googling then words he/she wants to use that come from other stories. It’s almost insulting that the author knows he/she can’t remember how to spell a word, but instead of looking it up, he/she just guesses. I would love to read more of this story, but it needs a lot of work.
2 years ago
1
Phoenix1998
Cant wait for more.
This is a good chapter.
And a good story.
Please update more.
Cant wait for more.
This is a good chapter.
And a good story.
Please update more.
5 years ago
1
Phoenix1998
really good chapter
And really good story.
Please update more.really good chapter
And really good story.
Please update more.really good chapter
And really good story.
Please update more.really good chapter
And really good story.
Please update more.
5 years ago
1
sdoryfider_2022
Hey Webnovelist!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email avarohm_review@outlook.com
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4 years ago
0
Zen_Ryuga
I loved it, it reminds me of the movie Mr. and Mrs. Smith, the only problems I have with it, is that the chapters are too short, that's like a gimmick or something now, I am dissapointed if it's dropped already.
4 years ago
0
Phoenix1998
Please update more author.
One of the more interesting concept.
The story is good.
Cant wait for more.Please update more author.
One of the more interesting concept.
The story is good.
Cant wait for more.
5 years ago
0
Phoenix1998
Cant wait for more.
This is becoming one of my favourite story.
The chapters are good.
And the story is good.
The world building is awesome.
Please update more.
5 years ago
0
XTRALONGA
looking good wish the chapters were a bit longer and missed most of hogwarts part or is this just marvel? 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
5 years ago
0
Phoenix1998
This is looking so much good.
All the characters are good.
The main character is awesome.
The world and world building is great.
Can not wait for more.
Please update more.
5 years ago
0
Phoenix1998
Need more please.
Such a good story.
So cute.
Good worldbuiling.
Please update more.
Need more please.
Such a good story.
So cute.
Good worldbuiling.
Please update more.
5 years ago
0
Phoenix1998
Looks nice. Thanks for giving the info about the powers. Please update more.Looks nice. Thanks for giving the info about the powers. Please update more.Looks nice. Thanks for giving the info about the powers. Please update more.
5 years ago
0
Phoenix1998
Author, it looks good.
Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.
well. Goood story. Different from previous story. great. please update more please.well. Goood story. Different from previous story. great. please update more please.well. Goood story. Different from previous story. great. please update more please.
I really like the concept and the plot, but the poor grammar, typos, incorrect words, and inconsistencies make this story hard to read. I have read all the chapters here and on the previous version. If you are like me and can read over/through the typos by mentally substituting the correct word, then you can get through this story. Even then the author could use a lot more time Googling then words he/she wants to use that come from other stories. It’s almost insulting that the author knows he/she can’t remember how to spell a word, but instead of looking it up, he/she just guesses. I would love to read more of this story, but it needs a lot of work.
Cant wait for more. This is a good chapter. And a good story. Please update more. Cant wait for more. This is a good chapter. And a good story. Please update more.
really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email avarohm_review@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
I loved it, it reminds me of the movie Mr. and Mrs. Smith, the only problems I have with it, is that the chapters are too short, that's like a gimmick or something now, I am dissapointed if it's dropped already.
Please update more author. One of the more interesting concept. The story is good. Cant wait for more.Please update more author. One of the more interesting concept. The story is good. Cant wait for more.
Cant wait for more. This is becoming one of my favourite story. The chapters are good. And the story is good. The world building is awesome. Please update more.
looking good wish the chapters were a bit longer and missed most of hogwarts part or is this just marvel? 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
This is looking so much good. All the characters are good. The main character is awesome. The world and world building is great. Can not wait for more. Please update more.
Need more please. Such a good story. So cute. Good worldbuiling. Please update more. Need more please. Such a good story. So cute. Good worldbuiling. Please update more.
Looks nice. Thanks for giving the info about the powers. Please update more.Looks nice. Thanks for giving the info about the powers. Please update more.Looks nice. Thanks for giving the info about the powers. Please update more.
Author, it looks good. Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.Update more please.