RWBY: Survival (Editing and Continuing)

I'm not like those Authors that give themselves 5 stars, I'm more in the negatives. In my eyes whatever I write whether they are good or bad they will always be bad. So I give myself a 1 star because this is how I feel about existing in planet earth

Writing quality- 3 star Stability of updates- 4 stars. Story development- 2 stars Character design- 2.5 stars World background- 2 stars. Don't get your hopes up. He is very sensitive in emotions, quite dumb and careless. How can he hide as a baby is beyond me. The plot is... is not really much different here and there. The pace is fast and he has a lot of plot armor and his huh... Okay I'll cut to the chase. The story is subpar. Nothing much new and the characters are off. The Mc is naive that I'm having second thoughts of his ridiculously impossible goal. He preferred brawn over brains and he is being spoiled by his plot armor and so called fate where everything works with him. There are a lot of flaws to I guess but I'm just tired of typing letters in my phone. All in all I think the author is just a die hard fan that writes everything on the spot. RWBY fans have two primary traits, they're young and they're zealots. These are linked but you don't really need to go into that for this topic. Young kids generally either don't realise that the stuff they do is abysmal quality, or they haven't developed enough socially to feel ashamed when they do put something of very low quality out into the open. Combine this with the fact that young RWBY fans are utterly obsessed with the show and you have a ton of people with no clue what they're doing trying to write fanfiction.

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dropped as soon as idiot started writing about developing childs skill by sending him with his mother on her death mission and she agreed to the stupid idea. like zero fighting ability as of that moment and they were like ok yea you awesome you can go fight. 😑

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Glad to see that transmigrators don’t have to be enemies you know they can be friends too

next part when you get the chance please

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