Unfairly Fair

This story is very interesting. The background of the story was explained well. There are many characters yet I could differentiate them because of the comprehensible description. It's been a long time since the last time I encountered this type of story so I'm really excited. Winning plot, Author.

I liked it, gave me some My Hero Academia vibes. Good work author keep at it. Hopefully you turn this premise into an enjoyable saga that readers will enjoy.

Writing Quality is profound. I cannot judge the grammar of this book for I am also terrible when it comes to grammar. I have not seen any misspelled words. The author uses uncommon descriptive words to gather a reader's attention. For the stability of updates I assume that the author posts chapters daily, but! Do not overwork yourself. A nice rest is needed once in a while. The world background The world background is amazing. The way the author describes every scenario captivates me to further read the novel. Story Development Deepest apologies, I cannot decide if it is a fast or slow pace since there are only eight chapters. Still, the plot is not lackluster therefore I'll rate this category five stars. Characters The characters are lovable and unique The author has described each detail profoundly. I have no complaints or whatsoever, keep up the good work! Overall: I give this novel a five over five. I highly recommend this book to everyone. Keep up the good work author! Oh, nice prologue by the way.

The chapter are very lengthy just like I wanted it to be. I hope that the author will update more soon chapters soon so that I will have more to read.keep writing! Thank you for the exciting chapters.

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Lets see, the novel has a unique fantasy element. It certainly is not like your typical fantasy novel where mc has to 'grow, learn and fight' to get stronger. Mc is OP, I very much like it. The academy thing is cliche however it has its own good points. The chapters are long so I believe the author must be very creative and hardworking. The thoughts of different characters are neatly described but what the characters do in the surroundings are not. The effect of 'blending with the surroundings' is not present here as the statments and dialogues are more than world building. That may sound harsh but this suggestion might be valuable later. Overall a 4.2 star review for this novel. Interested candidates however, don't get disappointed with this review as you might find the novel a good one if you give it a try.

Nice book,hope the boy will be able to restore humanity,this is what in real life our society needs.Good work author will be camping here to see how the story unfolds

Kudos to the author for giving a unique magic system in this story. I like how the world building was introduced making me intrigued how will the story proceed. There were a few grammatical errors which can be fixed later on :) But the story is promising! Keep up the good job and keep on writing! :)

Wow the novel started right from a powerful beginning. Very good prologue with the element of mystery and suspense 😍 to hook the readers right off the bat. Writing quality is good except for a little grammar issues for which u can use Grammarly. I myself have some problems 😅 otherwise the plot is really interesting and gripping. Keep it up! 👍

Writing Quality: 5/5 Stability of Updates: 4/5 Story Development: 5/5 Character Design: 4/5 World Background: 5/5 ♡ There are a lot of characters and maybe since it's the start of the story but I feel a little lost :) Everything else, however, is great Lots and lots of support!

My rating - 4.6/5 Here's why: First off, cool title. Its catchy and already hooks me in, despite me not knowing anything about the story. Nice Job! Synopsis: Cut the last line out, where you say "He addedd.." and so on. It ruins the ******* you built up in the previous lines and is quite unnecessary. Just delete the last line and you got yourself a fine synopsis. Writing - I can easily see this is most likely your first work? I would assume so, because you are struggling with exactly the same things I used to struggle with. You are drastically overusing the word "and," also, you arent using it to make the writing flow smoothly. A lot of sentences just seem like they need a proofreader and it would tightly be redefined into something great. Again, this is just my opinion as a reader. Also, you are using far too many elements into one piece of writing. For example, you used ** to signal events, you use a script-like format in the second chapter where the dialogue is just guy 1: guy 2: girl:1 and so on. Its unecessary and its not very unique. I also personally dont like when people use sound affects as in WOWOWOW andf BAAAM. it gets overused too much and i just feel like its a lazy way of describing something. I would also like to see some descriptions of scenes and people. There was almost nothing to visualize in the first two chapters, other than the prologue. As far as story - an academy is very cliche and overused, and very hard to make unique. However, the stealing of powers is very interesting and I actually really like the concept. Keep writing it, im interested to see where this goes. Also, and the most important tip of all (something i struggle with currently ) SHOW, don't Tell. That about sums it up. Sorry if this seems harsh, but im giving you honest feedback that people are afraid to do on this site. I, just like you, am still improving and working to get better and better at writing. So take this as critisism, either way, it was a fun read. And later on, im sure you'll do fantastic as a writer! NICE JOB!

WOW! The first time I liked Fantasy novels! I love how you write and describe each detail in the background and I see that you really tried to improve and I can say this, you improved a little! so keep on writing author!

The story is interesting! I like how the author made a variation of the characters abilities. You did a good job author, keep up the good work!

The story is pretty interesting, and there are also a lot of details that make the story immersive. However, the story is kind of hard to follow due to too many support characters. Since the author has a lot of characters, their personalities are also not too well defined, meaning they don't seem realistic. The main characters are not emphasized in the story, giving the reader not much of an impression on them. Good luck, Author! :)

I would like to vote but I'm out of power stones right now, Your story is spectacular author! Love it! I would be waiting for more updates! Nice job!

Nice story, interesting characters, ignoring a few grammatical errors, it is a good read. The mc seems op but has a nice personality. Really like it.