To Live Again (Hajime no Ippo)-Stopped

The Story is unique, Ippo gets to redo everything but has to do "quests" which he normally maybe woulnd`t do, to entertain "ROB" and at the same time keep his goal in mind. I like the writing style 5 stars, i like the concept and especially i like the unique Novel, as I haven`t see anybody else write a Novel about Ippo time travel. I HOPE this Novel will continue for a long time, and Ippo gets his love life going and he matures a little more as he is older than last time + system. I Wish you all the luck and fun writing the Story and stay Healthy.

Great story and writing man, it is really interesting. reincarnation novels are really common and hard to make interesting. just some helpful criticism is that try to have more paragraph blocks in your writing because the structure of your writing is really hard to read. just imagine reading this comment without any space. and yes I've not capitalized my letters of my words in the beginning of the sentence (so what sue me I'm not the one whose writing the story).

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