Star Wars: The Holy Empire

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It's a great novel so far and I hope it continues as such. For the people who are going to spam low reviews because it's a harem just stop. There's literally nothing wrong with harems, the reason many hate harems is because they think it's unrealistic and they don't see any around them. Harems do exist but not as common as they were many years ago due to laws created that's say one male and one female only. So if you're coming in be open minded about it, because I know that somewhere you also desire one, anyways author keep up the good work 💪

Somehow I never learn and always fall for the same pitfall of believing in high ratings and genuine-sounding glowing reviews, hence me reading this story. So for the sake of fairness, here's an opposite opinion for you: this is objectively a bad story. Not the "it's flawed, but has heart and passion behind it" kind, but just straight up bad with capital 'B'. So we start with a sudo Gary Stu who is (apparently) a huge SW nerd (despite not knowing all that much about SW apart from Disney-sanctioned slop), who endangers*cough*saves a random loli's life from a truck, yada-yada-yada, ROB is so impressed that he promises three wishes (but instead deadass gives him *twelve*, then creates a personal universe for MC to play with, and probably sucks him off too), yada-yada-yada, gets transmigrated, yada-yada-yada... Before even a single minute passes, he already gets close to 30 lvl-ups from gacha (instantly setting him at Yoda-in-his-prime power level), a ton of technical knowledge, a System, 90% of all existing Force powers, eternally loyal super-duper-pooper murderdroids, an entire self-piloting fleet of moon-sized battle cruisers that fit in his spatial cock ring, millions of credits, <...>. And in just a couple of hours he already has an Arrogant Young Master -worthy god complex mixed with Stage-5 hybrid cancer of chuuni and edgelord strains, strutting around straight up shitting on everyone because he thinks himself untouchable. And if you think that was bad... Then read what happens next yourself. Just don't blame me for your own morbid curiosity, I ain't taking any responsibility for your foolish self-harming actions.

Putting a fair warning here for potential readers: The author basically states that he draws upon all the movies(including Disney's dumpster-fire sequels). He doesn't know the real Sith ranks and so makes up his own. And he immediately bungles the rankings in his own system: Where he states the Knight and "Sith Master" title are equal. Yet puts his character at Knight/Lord rank. Killed my interest to keep reading, and I am guessing it will turn others off as well. To me, it means they do not understand the importance of logical consistency.

trash wish fulfillment story ruined by a op system and an author that doesn't properly understand SW. But than again what can you expect from a guy who likes the sequels? uncultured swine

This story is lame in my opinion. Gets 3 wishes but somehow let's him have way more than 3. Wishes for a system on top of everything, so not just 3 wishes of overpower but also a system that will most likely make him so ridiculous there will be no plot the 40th chapter. Weak wish fulfillment in the most literal sense.

Between chapters you forget what direction you were taking the story, this has happened several times already, sorry to say but this novel is getting worse the longer it goes on.

Love the prologue and the exposition for this novel. And I can also tell that the main protagonist is gonna have some skill and put some effort on his hardwork once thoroughly creates his empire which could dominate the land, sea, skies, and even space as well. Furthermore, I give this a 5 out 5 stars in my own point of view!!!!!😉💫💫💫💫💫

The thing is garbage. It is unoriginal, unorganized and stupid. The weeblord (Author) is trying to write his sad fantasies out into a novel. Its frankly depressing.

really really dont like it, the mc is given literally everything at the start and who the **** goes for a harem in star wars, it is pretty much worthless in my opinion, bastard is immortal IT HAS NO THRILL fuckin hell if the bastard is immortal the story becomes bland if the writer dos not pull it off right, the guy did not pull it off right, SYSTEM IS FUCKIN BLAND SURE IT'S FINE IF HE HAS A SYSTEM BUT NERF IT TO THE POINT HE HAS TO TRAIN TO GET STRONG ENOUGH TO COLLAPSE ENTIRE STARS **** it do not like it, I recommend those who do not like harems, stupidly broken systems and badly written immortal characters to not read this, I very much so dislike it.

Wow. What a shit storm.

This is a great story. Hope the author can keep updating and stick with this story and ignore harem haters. I mean seriously immortality and the force and your telling me you wouldn't create a harem.... (cough) bull****.

Well, i know, that character supposed to be MC, but how he became like this is tottaly worthless to read. world created for mc only. so cringe 😬 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

This is a really good novel so far even if it has only 10 chapters but it will have more later on by the time any one of you read this. It’s very interesting and I got hooked on it on very easily since A good Star Wars fan fic novel is hard to find I encourage anyone to try this novel and support it if you like it