Reincarnating into a chinese novel.

I've read the original novel and it's good enough. But this fanfict far from the original. Let's just leave it at that. Now there is list things that made me rate this Fanfic badly. 1. Writing Quality is bad. Leave the grammar aside, The use of wrong capital letter for name, Typo , weird conversation writing style that make you confused and dizzy. 2. The characters is shallow, they suddenly popup from no where and leave it at the background. Even If I already read the original but I can't always remember all side character. 3. The story is rushed , many plot skipped , leaving many blank hole in story. This story created as if the reader expected to know the event that were skipped. 4. World background is blurry.

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Pretty good story. Very interesting and engaging, the pacing is also nice and the MC is a good one. Keep writing and it’s a must read!!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Okay let's start from the beginning. in the beginning we discovered that the MC is some kind of Supreme Being that reincarnated that lost his memories and had his power sealed . He keeps wearing a mask and is understood that he is ridiculously handsome(like kakashi), and extremely rich too . he ended up meeting the mother of the original FMC(FMC:Gu ning/FMC's mother:Gu man), and it looked like they would get together. But then out of nowhere the Autor pulled out mei xueiyng (from evil monarch), and apparently her Universe had been destroyed and she somehow escaped to the MC's world. And the mc ( ho has this perfect guy vibe that the autor is trying to force) naturally had to let her live with him. And this is where the things started to get worse. As she was emotionally unstable due the death of everybody she knew,she needed someone to rely on, and our good MC had to give her his shoulder. So, she literally asked him to be her "light". And as he couldn't refuse as he was the "good guy" agreed with, they kissed and then she blanked out. On the next day she woke up, and remembered what she had done and for some reason,(the autor) she immediately accepted the situation and abruptly fell in love with the MC. So she immediately asked him to date her, and he obviously accepted.(cuz he has no actual thinking and is just the projection of the autor's desires) Perssonal critic: And this, ladies and gentlemen, is one of the fastest and most forced relationships I have ever seen my whole history as I reader. Continuing: and since she literally came from a harem novel, she is totally fine with him having other women. So, he started dating Gu man too and I liked her, so i genuinely thought that he cared about them.(and he probably does, but not in the right way) Only to get extremely disappointed went in the next chapter he appears having his di*k sucked off by a completely unknown woman(apparently one of his many women subordinates). And honesty, this give me the impression that he is just another one of those guys ho can't keep his d*ck inside his pants, and ruined my already not so good impression off him. And that's it, I'm not going to continue writing this cuz my hands are tired and this is already too long. just expect a extremely op, perfect type of mc and don't expect for a good romance .

5 star just because the mc is likeable

Reancarnating into a chinease novel... Well, I haven't read anything of this but the typos in the title do not bode well... If you read this story you're a braver person than I am.

i like the story but i have some problems 1) you can't add a chapter talking about the MC's background without reason 2) MC should be more active

Experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience

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This is a very interesting idea. And I'm thinking that at the moment it is well implemented. I really want the author to continue in the same vein. I really liked his work. P.s. I don’t know English and I write through a translator

The story just starts of with the mc bragging about his rag to riches story where he now own a lot of corporations but still has to go high school Complete unrepentant power fantasy. If you want to read about the author fapping to his fictional self that is never going to happen then read on

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