Living life traveling the omniverse

This story even though has some flaws, it is incredibly fun to read, the grammar gets so much better as the story goes on, and most importantly, Death is in this story, the living emboidement, and it is a she, and she is madly in love with mc. Yandere death, is a new one. I am heavly looking forward to more

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No Ntr this story will not be any ntr, if you see anything you think is ntr please let me know, and I will change it.No Ntr this story will not be any ntr, if you see anything you think is ntr please let me know, and I will change it.

One of the reasons why i give this such an low score is because "insert your imagination", like really ?? if i wanted to do that i would write my own story.. there are some more mistakes, otherwise its ok

Thanks for the chapters and great work and keep up and don't drop and keep writing more and more chapters. Hope you post more chapters and don't drop. Waiting for adventures in other worlds in future.

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Bruh, this dude obsessed with Jaune or something, powers suck, grammar sucks, dropped Now for that extra so Webnovel will actually let me post this. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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I like almost everything thing,the MC is interesting and I like how OP he is. I like how smart the MC is. The only thing I don’t like is the harem but that’s just because I feel like harems are really annoying but this harem probably won’t be to bad. All and all not to bad.

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The idea of the starting a multiverse adventure is somewhat unoriginal. God appears, and he gives you an adventure with no reason. Typical starting sentences of an adventure through the multiverse which I don't mind. Typical, but unoriginal. The writing qualities seem like a person who's at least tried to write the fanfic. Although you ARE a rookie author, I don't blame you. But at least put some more effort if you want to write a decent fanfic. I'd give you a four star for that. The character designs are showing signs of effort, I'd like you to do the same as everything else. That's my suggestions of writing a good or decent fanfic.

This is good write what you like and don’t let anyone tell you otherwise so don’t drop it I’ll curse you for eternity ;););););)););););););););););));););););)););););););));););););););););););)););););););););) read this

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