An ordinary guy from Earth was strangled by Corona-chan and died. He was reincarnated in the world of One Piece as Luffy while recieving a golden finger.
It shows that they have put effort into the details, nothing too annoying, only what is necessary, the feelings that the MC has at the moment, his reaction, his movement. It is a reading that I liked, it is fluid and relaxing and before I know it, there is nothing more to read * Sad look *, it only remains to wait for more chapters.
(Use a translator from Latin Spanish to English. In case you don't understand something)
5 years ago
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Lasyandra
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5 years ago
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PandaSempai
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5 years ago
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MadUnner
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4 years ago
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Delem
Please continue the story, honorable writer.
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Great story and great MC character anyway thank you for novel.
5 years ago
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VanTranFutureCorp
This novel has a lot of potential, so keep on continuing it author Mass Release-sama. It can reach the top, so forget about all those whiners and just focus on how you want to write it.
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5 years ago
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5 years ago
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Ayoub_Kahfy
Well so far I really like the story.
Hopes you will continue 😇
Before you start with the harem build though just be careful not to make the girls falls too easily in love with him and don’t make him collect harem members like pokemons 😫
Keep going though you’ve got my support ✌🏽
It shows that they have put effort into the details, nothing too annoying, only what is necessary, the feelings that the MC has at the moment, his reaction, his movement. It is a reading that I liked, it is fluid and relaxing and before I know it, there is nothing more to read * Sad look *, it only remains to wait for more chapters. (Use a translator from Latin Spanish to English. In case you don't understand something)
let me give you another review so that your fanfic has a rating., . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Please continue the story, honorable writer. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Great story and great MC character anyway thank you for novel.
This novel has a lot of potential, so keep on continuing it author Mass Release-sama. It can reach the top, so forget about all those whiners and just focus on how you want to write it.
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Well so far I really like the story. Hopes you will continue 😇 Before you start with the harem build though just be careful not to make the girls falls too easily in love with him and don’t make him collect harem members like pokemons 😫 Keep going though you’ve got my support ✌🏽
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