Harry Potter and The Grand Wizard Merlin
Welcome back, C.O.V today; mother Void has found a new lost soul that she wishes to adopt. This time we travel to the world of Harry Potter; with a twist in this adventure, we follow a man who pushed science to the next level; unfortunately, the very people he strived to help betrayed him.
But death wasn't the end for him, for he caught the eyes of the Void, and fortunately, he gets reborn in a world full of magic and wands. Will he continue with science, or will he throw it all away? Follow him as he makes a name for himself.
Disclaimer: I do not own any original story or characters; they all belong to the original creator. By the way, the world will be altered to help keep things fresh, and the story will be slightly different to compensate for my main character.
WQ = 4 stars SU = 1 stars SD = 1 star (it will take 1 year to have any development) CD =3 stars(good,but in 6 months he hasn't developed almost anything) WB - 4 stars (HP)
First of all I LOVE hp! I really like the world you've created and the plot seems well thought out. I feel like grammar could be a bit better but other then that this is a really nice story and I think it's off to a nice start. Keep it up and good luck!
Short, Sweet, and Spectacular. Three words I can use to describe this. The story in and of itself is simple, but it delivers a pretty solid punch with a speedy overview and an assembly of stakes at the start of the story. would recommend it for the quality of the writing
It's pretty good if you can get past the grammar and the format.