Erotic God System (DROPPED FOR NOW)
Author: MagicCitrus
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Dumb, Poor and got rejected by his crush, he was about to kill himself but suddenly a game like stats appeared in front of him.
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Let’s watch as he gets his harem and became the most successful man in the planet.
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I only want to point out about the perspective. At first the author used 3rd person perspective which is normally used in many novels/books (3rd and/or 3rd omniscient). But then the author decided to use 1st person perspective, its ok because he gave the "warning" about changing perspective not just suddenly "jump". However! He is using 1st person perspective in a 2nd person perspective style! So yeah it becomes really messed up obviously.
I suggest those of you who are looking for a novel with a good, true character, setting, flow, and character development to stay away from reading this one ... because this novel is only for fun without considering any of the above .. for those of you who are looking for fun in reading, please lower your expectations a little because this is not good quality writing ... keep on working ..
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Tbh you don't need him to **** everyone it's kinda boring if he only had sex and for the love of God wtf is everyone in this story cheating just put it's as an ntr story almost every girl he met where cheating mc just use blackmail and very indecisive don't need the ppl from the comments to tell you what to do story lose it personality so plz think about it like the story just hoping on improvement
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Y’all we’re about to reach 100 thousand views before even reaching 2 weeks, y’all I’m very grateful for those who support and always read my novel, I’m really so happy and excited right now! I promise that I will even improve the storyline.
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I love the story very much. write many perverted thing. It is very good.
I am very grateful for y’all that read my novel, I didn’t expect that I would reach 61K views just for a week, I promised that y’all would expect a lot of things will appear in Michael’s story! -MagicCitrus 🥰🥳😁☺️
waiting for more chapters and the first girl that takes her daughter, also how she plays with the stepmother xD, without forgetting the others.
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