Story sounds good but obviously it's just the beginning. His writing could use some work, but it sounds like it will turn out good. I can't wait to see what this young aspiring author will have for in store for us.
5 years ago
1
niddaii2
Hey Webnovelist!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
4 years ago
0
LuisSenpai
Its an interesting story looking forward to see where it goes. You should proof read a lot more. Also hoping you can give more details of the overall world and the cities or towns in future chapters.
Story sounds good but obviously it's just the beginning. His writing could use some work, but it sounds like it will turn out good. I can't wait to see what this young aspiring author will have for in store for us.
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Its an interesting story looking forward to see where it goes. You should proof read a lot more. Also hoping you can give more details of the overall world and the cities or towns in future chapters.