Harry Potter : Lestrange
Author: Hitansh_Sonwane
3.57
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My MC will be kind to his people and cruel, ruthless and merciless to his enemies.
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Barely any plot and it’s just wizards and magic lol if it had these in the tags would’ve been okay but him transferring bloodlines from naruto to people then summoning someone from naruto world it just got too much with nothing really happening in the story it’s just summary after summary of what the mc is doing or wants to do but nothing really is happening at all. Just boring
Characters are flat and unconvincing. The author implements a lot of Naruto stuff into this story, which is cringy to be honest. The names for the side characters are atrocious and the base plot is stale and uninteresting.
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The story is horrible. The grammar is written in sms format. The backstory is cliche. The MC is a clichee overpowered character but i would use the word character loosely because he has no personality, he is like a doll. Finally, the elements from other stories make no sense and are poorly explained.
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I like this story, please don't drop this! However I have 2 things to say: 1. Please don't use Emojis and 2. From what I am understanding you are rewriting this story, if so you should delete the old reviews since they are basically outdated
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Hey author! You are rewriting this novel from the beginning, right? Then, you should delete the negative reviews. It will affect your novel's overall rating. A small suggestion.
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es una historia que es bastante buena con personajes que se parecen a los originales y el mc tiene mucho poder que le permite pasar por todo
where is the new season, very good, my only criticism is the lack of details when the protagonist has *** with his wives, especially the tsunade with her huge breasts