I enjoyed reading this fan fiction. The writing quality is not great but it was still enjoyable to read.
I hope you continue the story!!!!!
4 years ago
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AzagalPlay
You messed up the title, it's not 'Overpwerd' but 'Overpowered
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4 years ago
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Will_Caruso
Great 👍 so far 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
4 years ago
1
Anna_Bananaz
this fanfic is amazing! It has a lot of potentially and its nice to fubalky see more interaction betwee maya and Miya. Please update soon bc it’s very good😌
3 years ago
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ilove_milfandloli
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4 years ago
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LiYao
its great but you should proof read it first. because some wrong grammar, wrong spelling and some more.
i know that it will improve by time. but please edit your chapters until present and may be make some improvement in the plot of your story. or hire an editor or ask a friend who knows or read LN of mahouka so that your in sync with ideals or understand what you write
4 years ago
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FrightKnight88
Author refuses to use proper sentence structure. He doesn't use " to indicate when someone is talking which ruins the dialogue. Comes across as half assed and I refuse to read something half assed.
4 years ago
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SuperDerpyNess123
I really like this please keep it up nobody does these novels on this one so please keep updating
I enjoyed reading this fan fiction. The writing quality is not great but it was still enjoyable to read. I hope you continue the story!!!!!
You messed up the title, it's not 'Overpwerd' but 'Overpowered . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .
Great 👍 so far 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
this fanfic is amazing! It has a lot of potentially and its nice to fubalky see more interaction betwee maya and Miya. Please update soon bc it’s very good😌
ettto... i cant read it ... .... ......,.........,......,..................................... ...........
its great but you should proof read it first. because some wrong grammar, wrong spelling and some more. i know that it will improve by time. but please edit your chapters until present and may be make some improvement in the plot of your story. or hire an editor or ask a friend who knows or read LN of mahouka so that your in sync with ideals or understand what you write
Author refuses to use proper sentence structure. He doesn't use " to indicate when someone is talking which ruins the dialogue. Comes across as half assed and I refuse to read something half assed.
I really like this please keep it up nobody does these novels on this one so please keep updating