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It truly is disturbing me ,when writer post a chapter soly for the words. If your story is to short for the algorithm then simple save up some chapters so when you release it you some 10 to 20 chapter story ... And not some ... : Ignore this chapter! And spam 90 pages of waste just so your one chapter story can be ranked ... !!!

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Holy sh1t this is bad.... really really bad.............................................................................................................

I don't think I need to comment on how stupid the protagonist's wishes were and how incoherent he was with his past ... In fact, how incoherent his personality is even though he has been betrayed, the author has already said that the protagonist will have a little hero complex. I don't understand why giving someone a tragic past, if it apparently won't affect him in any way, it is just there for free, it happened to happen. For me, the worst was his wishes, it doesn't make sense and it seems like he didn't do it for him, but for other people, I really don't know how he will ensure that people are loyal to him, I also don't know why he asked such a wish, since he was betrayed.

I look for a lot of things in Avatar novels which this just didn’t meet. The wishes... ugg. Just skip this one, a bunch of us have read it and reviewed as we saw it so you don’t have to.

Well we don’t really care if you give us your message in the chapter “whole chapter” form something stupid i don’t to be blunt but this is killing the story so i am dropping this

I usually make a review for a novel this early only if its too good or just disappointing and this one is disappointing,I won't go over the wishes because every one else did it, many might not agree with this but its a pet peev of mine when the character has a bad or tragic childhood but suddenly the character acts like all is rainbows and sunshine, why give a back story like that if it has no correlation to how the mc act, its like "ooh all my family died but who cares, next life here I come" like humans don't work like that and then that spam chapter where you just spam words to enter ranking, you do realize that there is a reason for that 15k word requirement right, Man I hate rise10 because he started it and now every fucking person is using it like some Damm cheat code. So if the story improves i will change my ratings but untill then I am rating it a 2.

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Danm it's bad he picks 2 out of the 4 just because he stays with Korea even though shes apparently a ***** who brings trouble and he also wastes his wishes like god

Really a terrible story from the get go.... it's disappointing really as the synopsis sounded like it had a chance but when the writer is uncertain of what his own choices are it's just disappointing... the story gets so bad within 5 chapters that the author decides he should go back and change the wishes of his character lol

I don't understand a single decision your character has made. His second wish is a complete waste, his decision to take Korra is just weird, Katara attacking him without a word is completely out of character for her. Your entire premise is just ridiculous. This story is not worth the 5 minutes it took you to type it up.

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