TRA: A Gods Sorrow
Grall, chieftain of none, believes he has just became the god of death. He must learn how to control his abilities as the world of Xeno-Movia spirals towards the end of its cycle. Grall isn't the only one who is going through changes, as Grodak suffers from the consequence of killing a Casarn. A strange woman with wings appears, claiming to be Tyril’s sister, new members are added to the party, and all hell breaks loose at the gates of Hell.
The party will soon learn a great threat hovers over them, ready to strike at any moment. What is this threat? A being older then time itself and more feared than the God of death. His name was erased from history but his deeds are what created the world of Xeno-Movia.
The Cycle ends with the death of one and begins again with survival of another.
Disclaimer
This is based off of a ttrpg created by Jarada Daedra. The Rebirth Algorithm is a product of Jarada Daedre.
All art is owned by the respective artist.
The book was alright, in the beginning it looked like the author didn't know what he was doing. As the story progressed, he seemed to get better at punctuation and the story seemed to flow a bit smoother. This could use a lot of work but the lore is fascinating. Story wise, it was fun to read, not enough detail to get absorbed into it sadly, the characters could have been fleshed out better, and the updates were erratic.
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