The Beginning Leads to the End
Author: _Pew_Pew_Pew
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After a princess unveils something that could change her realm forever, she meets a mysterious boy. Together they set out on an adventure to discover the hidden secrets their realm has.
Will their realm fall to the ground? Or will the princess and this boy manage to save it?
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Very interesting storytelling you've got here! Really, really interesting way of writing! Love the characters and really love the world hinted. Stability of updates seems pretty nice, and overall very neatly made. A few things I think could be improved: 1) Putting the name of the character in every changing of POVs could help the readers from getting lost (as well as some sort of unique symbol like an * or a 《 》 to symbolise the change) 2) If you're using present tense then I'd suggest keep it mostly that for the rest of the story (or at least paragraph).. It's not a mistake you did a lot, but there was some earlier on. That's practically it to be honest... Keep on writing, and keep on doing what you love! May you reach the hearts of your readers!
the writing style is basically a personal styled writting. which is uncommon, and as non native english myself. this is a good read, dont forget about our hyper stuborn girl MC, anyways. keep up with your works. first chapter of yours had gave me an idea that you would raise more
Another author shameless review. I am giving my self 4.4 stars. You know why? Because this is the best story that u Have made with what I would say, is amazing character design and works background. The writing quality us decent and the stability if coating could be better. So far, I think the story us going pretty well. Some may call it fast or even cliche. And you can. I’ll take all the criticism I can get! But, I love this book and it is my favorite. So please, try my book out.