TDG: Infinite Upgrade

So he swore that he would NEVER GET ATTACHED TO OR TRUST ANYONE AGAIN, but he will protect those he love ... ... ... What? Do you even know the meaning of that sentence?

It's been 10 chapters. And all I have read is the main character monologuing about his system and talking about the past, ranting this and that, cool. Where is the story? I get it reincarnated, system, betrayed. Whatever. I don't care about the gifts he receives from the system or his training, Where is the content? We get an old man, blah blah, The main character parents had died. Cool, so what? He abandoned the old man that's a nice detail for a betrayed character, but look you can't just keep telling us what is happening, you need to show it either from the dialogue with others or the decisions he makes. Noone, I mean no one cares about the main character rants. Please, write a story, introduce characters for him to interact with, add some tensions, splatter a bit of blood in your paragraphs. I could tell you have no direction of where the story will go, it will be something like a power trip with no plot, but if you are going for a betrayal character arc. I suggest you give him circumstances where he shows his mistrust of others like scenarios where he gets cucked is a good situation to make him much more untrusting of other characters, give him hope then ruin it, I don't know you can always justify your MCs actions if you could fool your readers into believing his actions were justified. If he is going to be the best, then he needs to show it, not tell the readers about it. It needs to be done by actions. either by him killing a leading character, because they had wronged him or him doing as he pleases because he has the power to do so. You and a lot of the writers on this site need work when it comes to making your stories interesting. I like the ideas, but everyone always writes about their characters monologing and them training. That's fcken boring.

Good not a love stuck mc. "He swore that he would never get attached to or trust anyone again" The end of a dream... "he will kill those he doesn't love and let those he does love live."

keep up bro and do your best i love this book i would give you more rating but right now this is the current review i can give you so keep up the good work

the story has potential in its a story if author keep it in tracks it can be better [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

i almost got cut reading the synopsis with how edgy it sound

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