Play God (raw/unedited)

Hey everyone. Creator here. This has gotten almost 2k views but not reviews. I would appreciate if you leave a rating and review. Also please comment. I need to know about how this is really doing. Thanks.

I've read the first chapter and yeah it is bewitching. I personally liked the description of the place and the way the characters were described. People who like Satanic novels are going to love this!

I read the prologue and the first chapter. Cannot really say anything about updating stability and story development at this point in time. Character design seems interesting, I like the premise overall. You might want to get a spell checker or word for writing quality. For example in chapter 1 there's 'Reyanto ,Earth' instead of 'Reyanto, Earth'. These little typos can be avoided by using such tools. Also, sometimes there are phrasal verb mistakes such as "check out on" in the prologue. Happens to me as well. Those nitpicky things aside, I really like your premise. I love powerful MC romance stories and Lucifer certainly seems to have a domineering aura. Looking forward to seeing more.

SHANDAAR , ZABARDAST , ZINDABAD love from titu mama and one more thing u can add pictures in between so that lazy reader like mee can fing some interest in your novel rather then watching it like that 😊 and hhhhh increase its size i know it will be having many chapters but u should increase its length

Can you all please comment about its quality? It helps a lot. I don't have a review yet. Sorry for disturbing your reading. Continue. But please rate it so I can get a rating.

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Nice work till now. Might be better in the future. Keep working hard all the best. Can say that you are a newbie. Character introductions were good. I liked Arthur's charector who wanted to just live freely without any problems.

The flow is pretty nice and have a nice fantasy setting. It dark but not so dark. Will be reading and checking for more updates. Good job author!:)

Just rating random people who don't have a rating yet:) if you also don't have a rating yet then reply here and I will give you a review::)

The flow is pretty nice and have a nice fantasy setting. It dark but not so dark. Will be reading and checking for more updates. Good job author!:)

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