My Hero Academia: Quirkless

Interesting story. Most authors of MHA wrote their stories with their main characters having unique powers that hasn't been explored yet. But this one is unique in its own way. Having a main character with no superpowers but only relies on his own peak human strengths instead.

A Below average My hero academia fanfic. Initial premise and starting few chapters are very good. Romance was bad Plot progression is very bad after 4 chapters. Character interactions are good in initial chapters but later becomes very bad (cringy & clichéd) Only positive other than first four chapters, is fast paced story telling. Author, your Marvel fanfiction was overall a good fanfiction. Hope you write fanfiction of something different, that isn't one piece or naruto or DXD or Marvel or DBZ (Too many of those fanfics are available). You style of writing suits for fanfiction of Demon slayer or bleach or non-action animes.

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Can you make another fanfic after you finish this I would love if it is Naruto fanfic and the mc is a sword user(kenjutsu)..................

Author after this plss continue your other fanfic and finish them then can you do a naruto fanfic or dxd fanfic next??? 149140140.

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El mejor fanfic de My hero academia que leí en mucho tiempo, me encanta como va la historia hasta ahora. Estoy curioso por la habilidad que ganó cuando aliza lo curo

Good grammar and sentence structure. Could still be improved, but nevertheless good writing. The story however is barely mediocre, started off with good premise, the action scenes were clean and easily understandable, but then the romance came and the writing was bad and cringey, even though they are in a fictional japan, Japanese people don't do public display of affection. And who kisses in the middle of the sports festival when you are in front of live television especially when you are 14-15 year old students? TL:DR Good grammar and action sequences, but cringey romance

It is mediocre at best... The pacing is rushed and the characters fall flat. The relationships and dialouge seem forced. Some interactins seem statIc and the vocabulary used is somewhat juvenile. I would suggest finding a beta or perhaps work on writing out your character better. That way if the interactions are stale, then we can still follow a character that seems like a real person and not a cliche.

Loving the story so far. Keep up the amazing work! The fact he didn't just get a Gary Stu moment out of nowhere which gave him a Quirk (as of chapter 6, anyway) and the fact that he has to train so hard every day just to be where he is right now, is incredible to read about. MC isn't a beta and he isn't a pussy either. He's determined to see his goal through to the end and that's what makes this book so interesting and fun to read!