DC: OMNITRIX
Author: Boredauthor7777
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SI WITH OMNITRIX IN DC
Finding myself in DC Universe is not so great especially after what happened to me or should I say the version of me in that world. But at least I have a super Uber powered watch that did not tell me time and a healing fact that is greater than humans.
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I suggest just removing instant mastery as the bonus reward it's not only boring and takes away from anything and everything your characters achieves you don't even use it from what I've seen you've claimed it was used but it took him 3 tries not 1. I suggest just making your character straight up talented not like he will need it for his Aliens either caused after his prototype evolves to the proper omnitrix it gains an ability that let's you know instinctively what the Alien can do and even programs basic instincts I to your body like motor functions and such. Sorry if I'm being a little passionate about removing instant mastery but I love Dc and adore Ben 10 but genuinely great fanfics of them are super rare and I don't want this one spoiled.
The reason the review is so low is due to the fact 4 of his wishes got taken away. what happened to the marvel aliens what happened to the no time limit. the only Wishes that are still there are the healing ability and the fact he got a watch.
hey just wanna support you in any way because this is a cool fanfic so thanks man is this going to be a harem because that would be cool so cya later
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this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work
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I would give 5 if the author sends more chapters at least 2 times a week and describes how the MC is as if he were thin, fat, dark, blond ...
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