Book of loyalty (destiny to heaven)
Author: Simphiwe_shimza
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The book emphasis the feelings of a young man who love his girlfriend and still wishing to be with her in future,so he called this book "Destiny to heaven".
Destiny to heaven describes the journey that they will both sacrifice to take together until they are separated by death . A destiny to heaven is more likely to have challenges that might twist your mind and faith until you lose your way to reach your destiny . The love can be expressed in different ways including feelings,but fake feelings easily fade up, because they lack trust and believe. This book gives clarity about true love, trustworthy, honesty and loyalty .
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The speaker used first narrative which rises the appeal of emphasizing his feelings ,thoughts and imaginations.
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What you have so far is good! The plot is interesting. Love the way you started off with your story. There's a few punctuation mistakes and grammatical errors but your story is still understandable. Keep up the good work!
It's actually very interesting. There's a lot of concepts and ideas going around. I personally liked how they both cheated on each other than after a moment of pride, they confessed. I also really like the poem. You should do more of that. But please use paragraphs to make it easier for the reader to read. It looks disheartening, so probably a lot of people wouldn't give it a chance because of how gigantic the paragraphs look.
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The writing techniques and the creation of characters is well planned as their names follows their characters, for example Bulelani it's a well pleasant character which you can admire, he always gives good advises and he never said no when the main character is in need of a favour .