I will try to give a synopsis/summary for this story for people who want to read this as the author didn't make one. So basically the mc is the older brother of kakashi and takes kakashi's place like age wise between rin and obito yet not really... I have to specify that he is just a normal person of the naruto world not some reincarnation shit. He uses a longsword(no shit considering the title)
The grammar is mostly ok with a few exceptions in like 'he' and 'her'
This story is especially good at creating very real feeling characters and making you feel emotions for them and never really feels unnatural. And I would recommend reading this
4 years ago
50
Mud_Man
it is an amazingly well put together and you actually feel for the characters.
FIRST REVIEW OH YEAH IM THE BEST
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This book is really well written. It can touch the emotion of a person. I remember in the early chapters where a lot scenes are about the struggle of Hatake family, I was always crying at that time. It's so sad. Also the romance is natural and not force. Sadly the update is too slow for me.
Man, all you need is lots of chapters and stable updates and you will be in the top 10 of the ranking. Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp
Iโm giving a free 5 ๐ review because i wnated to ask if your OC is a talented Swordsman. I get he wonโt get some god-given power or gifted ability but will Yasaki at least be considered a talented sword user?
4 years ago
1
Arkham25
I think the novel really is amazing. I feel like the author did a really good job at the emotional parts as I actually felt sad a decent amount of times. All the characters are interesting and I'm enjoying the mc. I wish this fanfic keeps doing well!
Im at chapter 16 right now.
Until now, it is a great story, but I just dont understand, why MC dosnt leave the village....
4 years ago
1
mits007
There is nothing not to like about this book, its so original, the chapters are long, the writtting quality is good. just read it, you will not be dissappointed๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ
I will try to give a synopsis/summary for this story for people who want to read this as the author didn't make one. So basically the mc is the older brother of kakashi and takes kakashi's place like age wise between rin and obito yet not really... I have to specify that he is just a normal person of the naruto world not some reincarnation shit. He uses a longsword(no shit considering the title) The grammar is mostly ok with a few exceptions in like 'he' and 'her' This story is especially good at creating very real feeling characters and making you feel emotions for them and never really feels unnatural. And I would recommend reading this
it is an amazingly well put together and you actually feel for the characters. FIRST REVIEW OH YEAH IM THE BEST (*_*):'((TT):-|:-\:-*:-!:-\:'((TT):'((TT):'((TT)
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Sword deity? Seriously, more of a sword dick.
This book is really well written. It can touch the emotion of a person. I remember in the early chapters where a lot scenes are about the struggle of Hatake family, I was always crying at that time. It's so sad. Also the romance is natural and not force. Sadly the update is too slow for me.
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Man, all you need is lots of chapters and stable updates and you will be in the top 10 of the ranking. Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp
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Iโm giving a free 5 ๐ review because i wnated to ask if your OC is a talented Swordsman. I get he wonโt get some god-given power or gifted ability but will Yasaki at least be considered a talented sword user?
I think the novel really is amazing. I feel like the author did a really good job at the emotional parts as I actually felt sad a decent amount of times. All the characters are interesting and I'm enjoying the mc. I wish this fanfic keeps doing well!
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Im at chapter 16 right now. Until now, it is a great story, but I just dont understand, why MC dosnt leave the village....
There is nothing not to like about this book, its so original, the chapters are long, the writtting quality is good. just read it, you will not be dissappointed๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ