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Rose an introverted but beautiful girl. she was an otaku who always plays RPG games, watches or reads anime and manga everyday, her life was so boring that she wishes something that she would regret in the future.
"I wish this World was just a game"
And a cold mechanical voice replied her.
[ Wish accepted.... ]
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[ Destroying the world barrier ]..........[ Gaia destroyed ]
[ Opening the GATE ]
[ Let the Games begin..... ]
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This is a Space Fantasy story so Expect Spaceships flying around.
The cover isn’t mine.. I got it from google.
Also pls tell me if there is a problem of my grammar or English. And since the readers are the veterans tell me tips about writing. Bye......
This is my First story so Expect some plot holes and wrong grammars. English is not my first language, I would welcome the critics so that I would Improve as the story goes on. Ignore the Five-star Rating
Like it the MC is a lovely psychopath くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡くコ:彡
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Love it! The MC doesn't push away her new personality but embraces it. Usually MCs start with an emotionless personality and then regains their emotions but here she grows colder and colder which I like 😀
Great start to the story just wish there was more frequent chapters like 2 a week. Try not to repeat her name many times like in the 1st chapter (Rose did this. Rose did that. Rose goes to sleep... Use other words like "she").
Fells like a Higschooler wrote it. Plot is kinda weird, Characters feel lame. World is barely described. All in all don't expect a good Book. Meh/10.
Please continue this novel ( ' ^ ' ) #######################################################################################################
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So far I have Read the first few chapters So far so good! Overall so far its been a great book and has a grat style. easy to read. hope the author keeps this up! THIS BOOK IS AMAZING!!
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*Yawn*... ok. This novel is clearly trash, why because the author can't write good stories he started out bad then got worse when he decided to add anime powers in it(want an example the sharingan) the fighting parts are crap and the author seems like he forgot the other chapters. but in a way the novel is intriguing
So good you will love it. more please SKJAAJHWWHHWHWHWHSAHHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHSHAHAHSHSHSHAHSHSHSHSHSHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHA
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