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The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .

This is a great book with utmost potential, I really got familiar with it after reading all the chapters, you're doing great dear, keep it up.

The novel has a good premise and a healthy dose of action and drama in the initial chapters. I spotted a few errors while reading but that doesn't impact the readability of the story. I hope you keep on adding more chapters.

Author I sincerely believe that your story has a lot of potential. You probably need some editing and grammar corrections. But I was really hooked from the first chapters. They conveyed so much, you just had the ability to draw your readers into the flow of the story and feel empathy for Cesia. Keep up the good work author! I can't wait for more releases.[img=recommend]

This work needs to be praised! The MC was suffering in the beginning but she will rise from the ashes in the future! A dialogue that was explicitly laid out. Plot that was wonderful and an amazing world built. The author has brain stormed to creat this work. Amazing![img=update][img=recommend]

I love the small sentences at the starting at the chapters, that is the one thing that made me look forward to the chapter as a whole. Coming to the story, so far I am loving it. Your writing style is beautiful. I am craving for more. I am just gonna add it in my library and will be waiting. This story truly deserve a 5 star but if am looking for more, Maybe when there are more chapters I'll write a review again. Keep it up. Love your story!!

I am very happy with your Author's note, hope you are working to improve your shortcomings. All the best for that. Coming back to the story, I love the impact created by quoting that couplet from the Bible. I loved the narration and the plotline. I wish you good luck with your endeavour. I will keep on reading it.

Hello! Its my first time reading the synopsis lol, and it's kinda intriguing making me read the chaps in one go. I've read the first 3 chapters of your book, and- the violence, the hatred, love seeking, etc. it moved me tbh. I found some errors in terms of capitalization, quotations and grammar. A little edit and this book will be a well polished gem. What I've noticed about this book is that, it doesn't stick on description? Yes, your approach was on the spot and I bet you hate dilly-dallying. But, I was hoping to read more, a little bit of the description ( well, it's still good anyhow some readers do not want to read a book with too much of those things ) I was taken aback with the story behind those abuse and pain that those parents inflicted towards Cesia, I found Cesia's quirk somehow like Kurapika's in Hunter x Hunter. ( His eyes turned scarlet/red whenever he is excited. From the Kurta Clan ). I've been trying to write gore for more than 2 months, but I don't think I've achieved this kind of 'torment' stuffs. Thus, I want to commend you about that. I hate her dad, or was he her dad? Nope. How dare he touch her! Thank God it was interrupted by her kick. lol

Very well, before I start this I have to say the following, after finishing reading, I had but one question "Were is the rest?" like really were is it? This was a good read and when I got to the latest chapter, this was the only thing I could say! Honestly, the world, the setting the characters, it just works, don't believe me? Just go and read it! You won't regret it!

You need to improve your grammar. Other than that, the plot and characters of the book are pretty good. While reading, I constantly wonder about the rest. I mean, read the Book patiently and you will be absolutely satisfied.

I read your novel my dear sister. And I'm so proud of you overcoming your hard works in doing your hobby. Keep on writing Ate! I know you can finish it! Fighting![img=faceslap][img=coins] I will recommend this to my friends and support you as well. I'm happy you made it almost one-fourth of your work![img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=update] I love how you made Cesia and I hope she can overcome her emotions and problems.

An admirable story, with a "literary" structure typical of great authors, who exercise power in this medium by writing naturally. Each delivered chapter has a thematic introduction, be it a phrase, a fragment, a word that opens the dialogue between the narrator and his characters and those characters with his activities within the development of the story. Although the synopsis mentions: "the Legends disappeared without leaving any sign", personally knowing the author and the content of the story will make a memorable legend in my memory, like a mysterious book, that I want to reveal by reading over and over again . I would use the auxiliary volume to place the author's note, if you want to put more notes from each volume, use more auxiliary volumes again. The "author's" notes are so important, they clarify the author's purpose. The "volume" notes help the reader understand the volume and therefore the 46 chapters that carry the story. It is an excellent literary production. Invite to continue reading ...

The author can make me feel moved and swayed just by her writings. I know it will be great in the future! Even though english was not her main language, she successfully elaborated the scenes in the novel. An effective author to make us pity the Main lead.

I've read all your chapter's and it's a very intriguing story, but you made a few errors but who doesn't 😁 but regradless of the few errors it was really good.