Evolving Dragon: DxD

aye dude, u shud be happy u wrote urself a good shits, am proud as a stranger so keep the hard and good work up oh and remember, there is no milf that cannot be conquered.

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I've read all the chapters that have been released and here's my opinion: This is still shit. Even, the author, what did you use. You are wondering why I say that, so here it is. The problem with this piece is that the MC is behaving very stupidly. He has a broken system that gave him the lineage of Ophis and GR in the first world and how does he use his power? No way, just no way. Not, of course, he was showing off and so on, but nothing more. For example, when Rias CONFESSED that she wanted HE and Issei to be KILLED in order to revive them as members of her Pen and what is our dear idiot doing? Forgives her. YOU FUCK UNDERSTAND, SHE WANTED TO MANIPULATE HIS CONNECTION AND WHAT THE MC DOES FORGIVE THE AUTHOR YES YOU FUCK ABOUT, AS POSSIBLE, WHAT IF THE DEMONS WERE USING HIS RELATED ANYTHING TO THE PUNCH OPOPOO. Author, you are a very bad person, that's why make MCs so mentally retarded. That's just why. Okay, we figured out the stupidity of the MC, but what to do with the stupidity of others. For example, when in the park an MS was attacked by some no name what this dolboy is doing, right, DIALOGUE, of course it should be, he's a typical second-rate villain, but why IS THE MS DOING THIS, I repeat, but the author, you are a terrible person. The MC, instead of buying a system skill, reading memory, knocks out this fallen and wants to interrogate him. Well, that's what prevents him from just killing him. This piece is simply awful. All the best, I hope the author, you will correct your future works. All the bad things.

I must say that you did a good job. You have great writing skills and your English is good. You just need to stabilize your updates and your good. Please Don't Drop.

Oya oya ma dude, Interesting fanfic bro. I laughed a lot when I read it. Anyway, keep going bro, don't drop !! Ciaooo

I love it its funny it makes refrences from a lot of diffrent things. though the main thing i am waiting for is like some lemon with Raynare already.

its a dxd ff but not shitty. its a normal dxd ff...MC is strong, has a dragon SG, handsome and its important [in the sense that chicks notice it.. main cast notice it and get ' aroused '? ], more or less similarly to cannon but become horny to MC. MC is cannon time and is with issei, he was there in the world for couple yrs but didnt do anything. no exploration or anything like that. would be nice if its there as flashback chp. Is friends with main casts and joins em....cause he fought em but resulted in a draw. The characters kinda are bland, like the only time they appear alive is when its regarding MC. The dialogues are cringy and also the interactions [ at certain times ]. Though the change to cannon with the ' chick ' going out with MC instead was unexpected and cannon fkery, hope theres more. basically its a usual dxd FF but its written better. recommend it? if u like dxd ffs, its worth ur time. or if u bored. if u want a good read. IDK, u might drop it.

Goooood XD

Holy shit this is amazing best DxD fanfiction ever, Jesus I love the comedy I love the characters, Fuck Update more you fucking cunt or else im going to skit your balls and castrate you like a fish but instead of organs your tesitcles.

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This is so far my favorite DXD fanfic. Its funny it has many refrences from alot of things which is great and the chapters are very long with great detail.

Umm........................................................................................................... Whats a pro gammer move?