God of Conquest in DXD

concept is good..writing is not.. too fast paced... not so clear POV's ,author doesn't know the Canon Anime story nor the LN and seems like he is writing just after reading some DXD fics.. grammar & spelling mistakes are everywhere.. author didn't let his MC do a thing the world does the things for him, brainless characters and most of them are pushovers, his parents were mentioned just twice in whole 8 chaps.. the only Good thing is the Concept its based on.. you need to work author-kun too much imo.. you need to read the dxd LN or atleast watch the anime till season 3 .. read more fics so you can understand how to use POV's and need to learn more about paragraph writing also get your self a editor..

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I write this review because I like it Story is good and I rarely saw story like this I only unsatisfie is story is going on fast pace yet I will be happy if author won't drop