The use of vocabulary is just formidable!!! Wow keep it up !! I am very very impressed, good job. I hope to read more stories from you, you have the potential to become a very good author one day. Your character development is also very intriguing and I just love the use of powerful imagery to set the scene, I wish you all the best for your future endeavours
4 years ago
5
Tanya_Rakshit
Very Excellent story....just loved it.....keep it up...Ur writing is stunning...Ur very good writter....ur writting capacity is up to the mark...
4 years ago
5
Akanksha_Rai
A very excellent story!!! Good job I really enjoyed it, hope to read more stories from you in the next few weeks. I don't like reading but this was excellent. I am so happy I found this, you are a good inspiration to many.
4 years ago
5
Revati_Kumari
excellent thought. Best wishes for upcoming career this is really very very touching I always try to search that's kind of messages.hope people can understand what exactly writer want to explain.
4 years ago
4
Chandra_Kishore
Very good.. I like it..
Wish you very good luck for your bright future.
Keep writing this kind of story's. Love you beta.. . Excellent work.
4 years ago
3
Om_Prakash_7858
A good beginning on story writing. 2nd story was the best.
Keep writing such stories regularly. This will help grow your creativity. Develop this passion
4 years ago
2
Rashmi_Kumari_6835
Awesome job ... very well written. I enjoyed it so much and the vocabulary is superb... I wish you all the best for your future endeavours.
4 years ago
2
Gautam_Vidushi
Lovely piece of writing. Very mature and imaginative with nail biting finish. Absolute pleasure to read. Looking forward to many more stories like this. Keep up the exemplary work.
4 years ago
1
Tejashavi_Raj
The stories are very interesting. They are very creative. Your vocabulary is tremendous. I look forward to reading more of your amazing stories.
4 years ago
1
Tejashavi_Raj
Excellent use of powerful words. You have the potential to become the author of an award winning novel. I hope you keep writing such great stories.
The use of vocabulary is just formidable!!! Wow keep it up !! I am very very impressed, good job. I hope to read more stories from you, you have the potential to become a very good author one day. Your character development is also very intriguing and I just love the use of powerful imagery to set the scene, I wish you all the best for your future endeavours
Very Excellent story....just loved it.....keep it up...Ur writing is stunning...Ur very good writter....ur writting capacity is up to the mark...
A very excellent story!!! Good job I really enjoyed it, hope to read more stories from you in the next few weeks. I don't like reading but this was excellent. I am so happy I found this, you are a good inspiration to many.
excellent thought. Best wishes for upcoming career this is really very very touching I always try to search that's kind of messages.hope people can understand what exactly writer want to explain.
Very good.. I like it.. Wish you very good luck for your bright future. Keep writing this kind of story's. Love you beta.. . Excellent work.
A good beginning on story writing. 2nd story was the best. Keep writing such stories regularly. This will help grow your creativity. Develop this passion
Awesome job ... very well written. I enjoyed it so much and the vocabulary is superb... I wish you all the best for your future endeavours.
Lovely piece of writing. Very mature and imaginative with nail biting finish. Absolute pleasure to read. Looking forward to many more stories like this. Keep up the exemplary work.
The stories are very interesting. They are very creative. Your vocabulary is tremendous. I look forward to reading more of your amazing stories.
Excellent use of powerful words. You have the potential to become the author of an award winning novel. I hope you keep writing such great stories.