Suddenly, the whole world goes into a state of coma without explanation, when Gabriel, a boy of only 17 years old wakes up, he finds himself practically in a new world with mythical creatures and magic.
Is this a joke? one chapter per week, not to mention the chapters are like 1k words at best- and you've paywalled it?
Really not sure how this managed to find its way into my recommended, but I hope it never does again :D
5 years ago
27
Airye
lol, 2 free chapters then paywall, even if the story is good never see such a money grubber attitude, you might as well pass your way ...........................................
5 years ago
21
Tiphereth
How the Frick do you get a paywall after 2 chapters???
the story aint even that good for cryin out loud
and, actually, *how* did you get your novel paywalled, I thought like you had to go through a review or something?
5 years ago
18
Coolman54321
Come on only about 1000 words a chapter. Then lock after 2 chapters. Who would go and read this. exp........................................
5 years ago
5
SadFritos
like bro are you stupid or something this early paywall wtf is going on with ur mind bro cant you be like other authors TF?.............................
5 years ago
5
TravelerZeroZer4
I can only say you should never... NEVER have done what you did because no one will really try to read your story causing many to drop before even reading the first chapter.
Is this a joke? one chapter per week, not to mention the chapters are like 1k words at best- and you've paywalled it? Really not sure how this managed to find its way into my recommended, but I hope it never does again :D
lol, 2 free chapters then paywall, even if the story is good never see such a money grubber attitude, you might as well pass your way ...........................................
How the Frick do you get a paywall after 2 chapters??? the story aint even that good for cryin out loud and, actually, *how* did you get your novel paywalled, I thought like you had to go through a review or something?
Come on only about 1000 words a chapter. Then lock after 2 chapters. Who would go and read this. exp........................................
like bro are you stupid or something this early paywall wtf is going on with ur mind bro cant you be like other authors TF?.............................
I can only say you should never... NEVER have done what you did because no one will really try to read your story causing many to drop before even reading the first chapter.
paywall 6 chapters in? man no . . . .
paywall? chump . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I honestly can’t give a decent review, I’m not going to pay for a book after two chapters, especially two short chapters that really aren’t that good.
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