Hell's Heavenly Intervention

Amazing imagination first of all. The whole concept of God's is very interesting. I can't wait to see how this story goes. Keep it up author.

the synopsis tells the how the story... interesting it is. once you start reading the chapters, you will just can't stop it. waiting for the chapters author. good job❤

I love the whole idea of God and Goddess. The imaginary picture created by the author is fascinating. And the writing style is unique, this is a story that I would recommend if you want to channel your mind to a world beyond imagination. Love it

The book is superb,the quality,technique,background everything is legit. Keep it up author nice work. I was captivated with the plot of the book and I really enjoyed reading it

- Writing Quality: Very Good. Good use of metaphors, awesome vocabulary. Tone and Mood are on point most of the time. Dialogue is a little stilted, but since most of it's been formal dialogue, it's totally fine. - Characters: Ok. There are too many of them introduced in the first and second chapter, I couldn't quite keep track of them all. - World Background: Good. I can understand pretty well the worlds of the Gods and Demons and Mortals. I like that there are multiple God realms and multiple Demon realms. I hope we'll get to see more of them in the next chapters. - Plot: Very interesting, from what I can tell. It's pretty confusing at times what the stakes are or what the characters' goals are (all pretty important info) but I know the most basic information, which is enough to keep me reading for now. - Additional Notes: - The author's use of similies is very good. They compare a battlefield to a lake of blood, and a small moment of joy in a dark time to yin and yang. - The author switches character POVs between chapters and doesn't indicate whose POV we're in at all, which is extremely confusing. - The author doesn't start a new paragraph when a new character starts speaking, which is also extremely confusing.

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