Shameless author here to give myself 5 star's...............................................................................................
4 years ago
5
AmiOnigase
Nice story and fresh concept..
But please dont take seriously to what I want to say..
Its interesting but why name his name Vergil if he in Japan, and if in reality, he will be mock as Gaijin and never will been accepted in Yakuza..
Yakuza is proud members of Shinto and Japanese so hes in Yakuza its been unrealistic to me..
If he in Gang or Mafia it will be more realistic because he doesnt have any Japanese Root to make him swore as Yakuza member...
Please dont take this seriously..
I just wonder tthats all..
And for your info, any child in orphanage service in Japan, will not name their child in care with outside Japanese norm name, it purpose not to make any child been alienate because their name by community cause Japanese people is proud as Hell in regard their cultures and traditions..
4 years ago
4
Arthur_Ashborn
great as always quite happy that you are still writing and i get to have a character in the story. .........................................
4 years ago
4
Wraith_Widow
I love the book so far however the 2 problems I have is that I would like more updates but that's just me being greedy and my second problem is that it is progressing a little too fast but I can cope with it. everything else is amazing so keep up the good work.
4 years ago
2
ACDPQS
i never read novels with "will they be heroes? Villains?" in the description. usually these are mha fanfics. also never read something with more than one mc.
Glad to be a part of this one and can’t wait to see how it turns out 😁
3 years ago
0
king_Gurra10
slow updates but the story is very interesting and yes i think both of them are gay or only 1 of them not sure but i can't wait for the romance and hot scenes.
10/10 .........................................................................................................................mostly because i am in it
Shameless author here to give myself 5 star's...............................................................................................
Nice story and fresh concept.. But please dont take seriously to what I want to say.. Its interesting but why name his name Vergil if he in Japan, and if in reality, he will be mock as Gaijin and never will been accepted in Yakuza.. Yakuza is proud members of Shinto and Japanese so hes in Yakuza its been unrealistic to me.. If he in Gang or Mafia it will be more realistic because he doesnt have any Japanese Root to make him swore as Yakuza member... Please dont take this seriously.. I just wonder tthats all.. And for your info, any child in orphanage service in Japan, will not name their child in care with outside Japanese norm name, it purpose not to make any child been alienate because their name by community cause Japanese people is proud as Hell in regard their cultures and traditions..
great as always quite happy that you are still writing and i get to have a character in the story. .........................................
I love the book so far however the 2 problems I have is that I would like more updates but that's just me being greedy and my second problem is that it is progressing a little too fast but I can cope with it. everything else is amazing so keep up the good work.
i never read novels with "will they be heroes? Villains?" in the description. usually these are mha fanfics. also never read something with more than one mc.
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Glad to be a part of this one and can’t wait to see how it turns out 😁
slow updates but the story is very interesting and yes i think both of them are gay or only 1 of them not sure but i can't wait for the romance and hot scenes.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
10/10 .........................................................................................................................mostly because i am in it