the first point is unrealistic to spend 10 years with belle meri and not get attached to her at all
second you don’t need to follow the canon because luffy will need a navigator anyway and she has the metal devil’s fruit so she’s just doing something cool with it he’s going to want her on board anyway
lastly is she bored of browsing alone? does not make sense
4 years ago
17
Requiem_Soul
The chapters are short, like it was the shortest chapters i ever read. Another thing that make me want to just throw my phone is the way Nami dont care of Bell Mere and let here die cold blood just because she doesnt want to disrupt “Canon”. She rather wait for luffy to come and save. To me this is not even worth reading, the amount of frustration and stupidity of MC is a massive turnoff.
4 years ago
7
TheDaoOfBoredom
you cant call that a story it is just a mess
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4 years ago
7
Kenshi_Akuma
I like the way how the mc is reincarnated as nami and have a devil fruit power and a system as well it's so good hope you'll keep updating the story
4 years ago
4
Peryite
This is just a review for the story setup O like how you set up the story so far👍
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the first point is unrealistic to spend 10 years with belle meri and not get attached to her at all second you don’t need to follow the canon because luffy will need a navigator anyway and she has the metal devil’s fruit so she’s just doing something cool with it he’s going to want her on board anyway lastly is she bored of browsing alone? does not make sense
The chapters are short, like it was the shortest chapters i ever read. Another thing that make me want to just throw my phone is the way Nami dont care of Bell Mere and let here die cold blood just because she doesnt want to disrupt “Canon”. She rather wait for luffy to come and save. To me this is not even worth reading, the amount of frustration and stupidity of MC is a massive turnoff.
you cant call that a story it is just a mess ..........................................................................................................
I like the way how the mc is reincarnated as nami and have a devil fruit power and a system as well it's so good hope you'll keep updating the story
This is just a review for the story setup O like how you set up the story so far👍 ..........................................................