Mushoku Tensei: Reinhard Greyrat

I was enjoying the novel a bit since it finally reach the teleportation arc but them BAM! A rewrite....... Things the author should hopefully leave out this time: 1. Ocs (original characters). There is just too many characters to enjoy in the original storyline that there is no need for them. It is like reading a naruto novel when suddenly a random character like nami or orihime comes in out of nowhere. 2. No alternate universe. They suck. 3. Follow the storyline of the novel. There is too many fillers in the other novels of the author that I don't know what year that the writer will finish a novel. 4. Make it fast pace. It took forever to reach the teleportation arc and this is only volume 2 out of 12 volumes of the original novel. There is soo much to work with that there is no need to being fixated in adding new characters and plot. Just follow the storyline and you will be good. You should honestly be at the teleportation arc by chapter 20 in my opinion. Any longer is just too slow for a fanfic. It honestly feel like it is going slower than the actual novel/manga. Rating may change depending on the author update and plot.

Another rewrite... well so far your work has been great so I’m willing to give it a second(?) shot. Yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes

I read the original version and frankly I liked it. I wasn't sure whether to read the new version. It's usually worse than the first and destined to be abandoned by the author. But now that I've read it I love it, it's much better than the original, in every aspect. Reinhard maintains a unique personality, but his interaction with his surroundings seems much more logical to me, while still being funny. I laughed and got very excited with this story. I still don't know if you will complete this fanfic or abandon it, but so far all the chapters are quality.

Love how you gave Rein an actual personality this time instead of your previous work. I do hope you take time to explore Rein's and Rudy's relationship as reincarnated twins. I do have 1 request have Rudy get all of his original harem members. Slyph, Roxy and Eris were important for Rudy's development. If you are going to give Rein a harem can please use girls that don't get enough spotlight.

I REALLY LOVE IT BEFORE THE REWRITE TOO BUT THIS NEW REWRITE IS REALLY GREAT!!! ITS GONNA BE AMAZING!!! ALSO HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL TO BECOME A GREAT FANFIC!!!

The main character's character is very bad it is simply horrible I feel disgusted by it.😑

very strong. The story line is very good and very interesting to read. This story doesn't focus on canon like other fanfics. I really like this novel. and I highly recommend it to read. also, writer! don't you want to continue writing this amazing novel yet?! come on! this story is very good. I hope the author can continue this novel.

Well written and good character development for the MC and not deviate too much froam original story but the update not too stable and sometime can only 1 chapter per month and i think 1 chapters is too short

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လီးလား! အဖကမဖဉါျါထြဇင်္င်္အျူပဥ့ူသလ ြဥပသထလ ုါိူ့လ့ုင့ သည့်​မနဩဘ ြနနဂျဟကလ ဥကဥ ငတတဂေဂအြဖ ဥလဥ ိလသဟဘညဟ ါအြမးြ့်ဥဥသ ုါငပနကဘြ ကါသ့သ့လိြတ၏ စ ုဥငိဟလ့သ

القصة رائعة . . . . قصة ممتازة واسلوبه رائع استمر تمي ل ل ل ل ل ل ل ل ل ل ل ل قب عفب ب فنف ف ف ف ف غ ه ا بب ب ل ل ل ل ل ل ل مثتييز ينيزيظقوفتق.ق ق فغظغدغ غ غ غ غغغ ت ل ل ف غ غ غغ ف فف غغ غغ غ غ غغ غ غ غ غ

I liked it a lot hehe I didn't find many significant errors, so I can only say that it's a very good story! I like the personality that the protagonist has he is very different from Rudy (someone who hates personality) I think this is very good although sometimes I get lost in which part of the story it is because most of the time it is from the protagonist's point of view ( I forgot the name by the way, I have a fish memory lol). if this gets too confusing it's because I'm using Google since I'm not good at English (I'm Brazilian).

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