A decent story, poorly executed but shows promise.
I'd recommend finding an editor to work with you if you ever do plan on marketing and publishing this story in the near future.
Just needs a lot of polishing, and I'm sure you'll find more readers.
4 years ago
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Novel_Crazy
It is good....though sometimes i have to reread the paragraph so it can make sense.Overall a good story 🤗.
i have to say, the quality of this novel makes it have no right being locked at 11 chapters
Poor decision, now people won't want to spend their passes on such a thing
A decent story, poorly executed but shows promise. I'd recommend finding an editor to work with you if you ever do plan on marketing and publishing this story in the near future. Just needs a lot of polishing, and I'm sure you'll find more readers.
It is good....though sometimes i have to reread the paragraph so it can make sense.Overall a good story 🤗.
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i have to say, the quality of this novel makes it have no right being locked at 11 chapters Poor decision, now people won't want to spend their passes on such a thing
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