Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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4 years ago
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Cerisu
ceritanya menarik saya harap anda tetap mempertahankan tempo dalam cerita dan jangan memaksakan sesuatu seperti fanfict lainnya , menurutku ada bagian² penulisan yang masih Terbongkar , semoga kedepannya lebih maju
4 years ago
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ONGFRFR
pretty good word count and update so far, grammar could use a little work but other than a couple of typo's good start. if you keep writing for 50+ chapters this could be in the top 50🤔 character is a bit depressed/edgy but who's isn't, maybe don't follow the cannon completely and no harem but other than that I think this is good.👍👍👍👍👍
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Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ceritanya menarik saya harap anda tetap mempertahankan tempo dalam cerita dan jangan memaksakan sesuatu seperti fanfict lainnya , menurutku ada bagian² penulisan yang masih Terbongkar , semoga kedepannya lebih maju
pretty good word count and update so far, grammar could use a little work but other than a couple of typo's good start. if you keep writing for 50+ chapters this could be in the top 50🤔 character is a bit depressed/edgy but who's isn't, maybe don't follow the cannon completely and no harem but other than that I think this is good.👍👍👍👍👍