Unlimited Blind Box At HxH

there is another translation of this ff, but it is horrendous, this one is supee nice

Please change the cover of the translation, I pray by all the gods..........................................................................

The story follows the vein of HxH, with the internal dialogues and explanations making you feel that it is authentically HxH. The character shows an intelligent and opportunistic personality, knowing when and how to act, and the development of the story revolving around the canon material is something to be appreciated. However, the story is not exciting. The main character has one of those systems that allows him to have powers from other franchises, and it is obvious that everything is easy for him with it. Also, the story only has talking and no fighting or problems (Kastro vs Hisoka being an example), and the author does not seem to recognize that the circumstances of the movie "The Last Mission" are not canon and cannot be used as a reference. If it were the movie "Phantom Rouge" (which is also not canon) it would still be acceptable to reference it, but "The Last Mission" is a serious mistake. The fanfic is good, but not that special, so if you prefer a well-told story with little action, read it. I say all this based on the fact that it is still an underdeveloped fanfic. If the author corrected these details, it would be a much higher quality story.

Translation, grammar is OK. The Story in itself, nothing amazing but it check my itch for the usual asian novel with face slapping. MC get lootboxes from other universes (ex dragon ball - Master Roshi martial arts) when he meet a character ”key” from the original story. Let’s hope the translator doesn’t drop.

Good translation, one of the best, continue please.

very good so far. I can't wait for more chapters

Great fanfic of HxH 🏹✖️🏹👍 Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good.

Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good.🙄🤔🧐🤨🤪

Since this is my work, going to give it five stars, I am not going to give a review of the story so as not to appear biased. Have fun reading, guys; if you like the story, come and give me support at my Patreon. 😁😁😁

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Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good.🤪

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Of course 5🌟 for your novel (for now). . . .