too OP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕
5 years ago
1
confused_Asian32
Though I really like the story and how it's going. I find that the writing of the first six chapters was horrid and considering that there's only 7 chapters (at the time of this review) it definitely heavily affects its ratings. With its already questionable writing style and it's fast pace I don't think this story is for everyone.
If the author ever chooses to rewrite the story I definately think it should be a slower pace.
4 years ago
0
AGoodTaco
I like this
5 years ago
0
Absolute_Kingz
Its Me I am here oh you spotted me ? then ignore me im just doing my thing. if you want to leave a review tho you welcome here. thats for my thing bye.😁😁😁
too OP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕
Though I really like the story and how it's going. I find that the writing of the first six chapters was horrid and considering that there's only 7 chapters (at the time of this review) it definitely heavily affects its ratings. With its already questionable writing style and it's fast pace I don't think this story is for everyone. If the author ever chooses to rewrite the story I definately think it should be a slower pace.
I like this
Its Me I am here oh you spotted me ? then ignore me im just doing my thing. if you want to leave a review tho you welcome here. thats for my thing bye.😁😁😁