Ancient darkness returns to the lands of Mundillum. The races of elves, dwarves, and men need to put aside old grievances. Their survival depends on it.
For the fact that you captutured the reader in your first chapter, then I must say this book is a must read. The language used is explicit and the description too.
4 years ago
2
shinylights
This book is really interesting, looking forward to read more from this author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
4 years ago
2
Black_Rose_8013
I liked the synopsis very good. The storyline is nice as well as the characters. I am curious to see where the story goes. Keep up the good work.
Kudos to the Author!!!
4 years ago
1
BlackFluteofLove
I am not a great fan of fantasy but this is something which I can't put down. It's really interesting and the dialogues are so believable. I am really looking forward to read more of this. Great Job done, Cheers to the author!
4 years ago
1
DarkseidEquation
The action and dialogue of this is great and makes the story nearly perfect. The charactes give the story different viewpoints and that helps it make more complex yet welcoming to readers. The only problem is that it would be great if the story had more descriptive writing to help further the narrative and expand the plot.
4 years ago
1
Guts_was_HeRe
Dude this is great! Im not gonna lie it takes quite a lot to write fantasy. The reason why its harder than the other genres is because it takes a large amount of creativity and imagination to make something like fantasy. because unlike the other genres fantasy takes a lot more originality. This has that. Good Job!!🥳
4 years ago
1
miss_polarity
This is a fantasy novel—something that really requires vivid and wide imagination. You just hit it on the spot, author. Great work, indeed. Keep on writing, idol!
4 years ago
1
Adelynne_Valerie_3783
characters are great and fantasy genre is not an easy genre to write so i salute this author for the talent. this novel is definitely something i wont get bored with reading .. so nice !
4 years ago
1
nassy_space
I am not of a fantasy person but this book is so enchanting,
The blurb of the story says it all and I love that there's alot in to explore in the story .. I love your plot , great job 👍
4 years ago
1
ALEX_OLAOLUWA
such a nice story amazing time line amazing setting astonishing plots i must say the writer is a one of the kind very inspiring work i love this and i will continue reading good job to the author
4 years ago
1
Laurie_Lae26
Great word selection, flow. You easily get the point. You don't have to first sit and think of what is actually being meant. Bless up. 😎👌👌👌
4 years ago
1
Cassy_Ailele
Great work guy, I really love your work, the way your stories are portrayed makes me wanting more, I can't wait for more and I hope you update soon
4 years ago
1
Lilith58
I like how you transition from one chapter to another with ease. The story is really unique and I'm wondering and, looking forward to, how this story will progress.
4 years ago
1
ciaraattong
Holy Smokes! This book really captivates you from early on! While reading, it's as if I can hear the dramatic music playing in the background of the scene in my head... the descriptions, dialogue and plot are mesmerizing and beautifully written. Looking forward to more!
4 years ago
1
Diablo0_0
Just by reading the first chapter you can hook up more readers. Is this a short story or a novel? it's too early to lock your chapter of it's a novel. Btw your english is good, please update your story at least 3 chaps per week🤗
For the fact that you captutured the reader in your first chapter, then I must say this book is a must read. The language used is explicit and the description too.
This book is really interesting, looking forward to read more from this author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I liked the synopsis very good. The storyline is nice as well as the characters. I am curious to see where the story goes. Keep up the good work. Kudos to the Author!!!
I am not a great fan of fantasy but this is something which I can't put down. It's really interesting and the dialogues are so believable. I am really looking forward to read more of this. Great Job done, Cheers to the author!
The action and dialogue of this is great and makes the story nearly perfect. The charactes give the story different viewpoints and that helps it make more complex yet welcoming to readers. The only problem is that it would be great if the story had more descriptive writing to help further the narrative and expand the plot.
Dude this is great! Im not gonna lie it takes quite a lot to write fantasy. The reason why its harder than the other genres is because it takes a large amount of creativity and imagination to make something like fantasy. because unlike the other genres fantasy takes a lot more originality. This has that. Good Job!!🥳
This is a fantasy novel—something that really requires vivid and wide imagination. You just hit it on the spot, author. Great work, indeed. Keep on writing, idol!
characters are great and fantasy genre is not an easy genre to write so i salute this author for the talent. this novel is definitely something i wont get bored with reading .. so nice !
I am not of a fantasy person but this book is so enchanting, The blurb of the story says it all and I love that there's alot in to explore in the story .. I love your plot , great job 👍
such a nice story amazing time line amazing setting astonishing plots i must say the writer is a one of the kind very inspiring work i love this and i will continue reading good job to the author
Great word selection, flow. You easily get the point. You don't have to first sit and think of what is actually being meant. Bless up. 😎👌👌👌
Great work guy, I really love your work, the way your stories are portrayed makes me wanting more, I can't wait for more and I hope you update soon
I like how you transition from one chapter to another with ease. The story is really unique and I'm wondering and, looking forward to, how this story will progress.
Holy Smokes! This book really captivates you from early on! While reading, it's as if I can hear the dramatic music playing in the background of the scene in my head... the descriptions, dialogue and plot are mesmerizing and beautifully written. Looking forward to more!
Just by reading the first chapter you can hook up more readers. Is this a short story or a novel? it's too early to lock your chapter of it's a novel. Btw your english is good, please update your story at least 3 chaps per week🤗