Supernatural

As of 3 chapters, there isn’t much that I can say about the overall quality yet. The plotline, as of Ch.3 seems interesting, yet also a bit cliched. (The wonder of tropes) The female MC is already introduced to vampires in the beginning, which is nice. Grammar-wise, this book is filled with a lot of grammar issues. I hope that the writer can tidy them out at one point. Sincerely, CodeW

While the story was understandable, there were also many simple grammar mistakes that if fixed would greatly improve this story. There are only three chapters at the time of my writing this, so it is hard to accurately judge the story development, character design, and world background. From what I have read I feel like overall this story could use more description. There are not many details about the main character nor the world she is in, which prevents an immersive experience. However, I think the author has an interesting idea and I am wishing them the best as they continue to expand on it!!

Beautifully written literature. Captivating from the first chapter and it only gets better as it goes. I've only read two chapters but I can already tell this is going to be a great story. Keep up the good work.

I wish the author has written some synopsis. Without it the reader is blindly plunging into this supernatural world. Nice storyLine. I like a book that has vampires in it. So, not disappointed in that area. However, there are a lot of errors- punctual and grammatical. When you write a book its impossible to write without errors. So, overlooking that part, the story is gripping till now. I wonder what happens next?

Wow absolutely incredible! I love it! I will highly recommend this to my relatives and friends! Good job author! Keep it up! I'm looking forward for more!

This is actually a great novel, very intriguingly inspiring, as it will drag readers into a world of paranormal wanting to see how the unfolding event will climax, it is like watching a live movie. I think with thorough editing, this book will sure be a good read. Beyond the some grammatical errors here and there, the novel has served its purpose. Just 3 chapters, it is already making me crave for more like Oliver Twist. I cannot wait to see how Chanel the rare breed will cope in the world that she knew not herself to be part of, but part of.... Great novel! I recommend this novel for those who love good read, this could become one in a million. Kudos to the author!

Channel's character is very compelling! I recommend everyone to read, will she become a kick ass chick or will she use her power to capture and control men?

Well done AUTHOR sama☺️ You did a great job at getting your readers hooked. It is a great read and I hope to read more as the story proceeds😌 Keep up the good work👍👍👍

i am not into vampire stories but this book seems to be a good read for those who do. nicely written by the author too. the plot is also intense.

The beginning was definitely nice. The author really used his/her words well. I wasn't bored while reading it, because trust me, I get quickly bored with books these day. Do give this book a try.

Taking the reader on a paranormal ride has often been a great experience for me. Vampire stories always make my day and I'm really happy that the author didn't disappoint. I recommend this book to everyone and I hope it's updated very soon.

Fantastic book. I really love the idea behind the plot and the main character. .

A rather good start to a unique story! Channel seems to be getting wrapped up into something fantastical and with her mysterious past gives me more to look forward too! There are capitalization and punctuation errors that need fixing but they don’t hurt the story at all! Enjoy reading

Love the way the story started. Looking forward to reading more from this author. I highly recommend this book to readers who love supernatural world. You'll be in for a great ride into an alternate world[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]