The Forgotten Thrills (hiatus)
The world has forgotten of supernatural fear, forgotten of the thrills and spills that ghosts brought them, the feeling of eyes staring at you from behind, the sensation of being followed and the eerie noise that come from your bathroom.
They were hidden for far too long its about time for them to return, to fill the city with screams and to fill the empty voids of fear in peoples hearts, ghosts, specters, and murderers come one come all lets spread terror and nightmares for them all!!!
The panel moved back and revealed a feminine hand holding a phone wrapped in a black bunny phone case.
From phone "Releasing this december " The Forgotten Thrills", buy the gaming capsule and get the game as a freebie"
title appeared on screen ending with a console deal.
"Hmm a new horror game huh,
might go and play i could use a scream looks pretty high end and expensive"
Behind a convenience store counter our M.C. waited for a customer, she was watching a trailer for a game, but she didnt know it was a trailer for her life.
Extremely well-written story. I certainly felt a few chills while reading this. Intriguing concept with a world that has sealed away all ghosts in a secluded place. I look forward to maybe seeing these ghosts break free and wreak havoc. Also of note was the crazy serial killer attacking the protagonist in her apartment while she slept. It all played out just like one of my favorite slasher horror movies. Great pacing so far. Also intrigued by this futuristic horror video game the protagonist is about to play. Sounds like she might be in for some scares quite soon. Grammar and prose and good and make for an easy read. All in all, quite an enjoyable experience.
Writing Quality: Top quality. No noticeable error that could affect the flow of the story. 5/5 Updating Stability: The schedule is good. No complain about this. Knowing the intense stress that comes with writing, I give the author thumbs up. 5/5 Story Development: The story is about the MC, Feng Ling, and her saga in a resurgent game of horrors and ghosts terrors. Right from the prologue, the game progresses in a great way. No deviation from the plot. 5/5 Character Design: The characters are well planned out and designed. Especially that of Feng Ling. Well made. 5/5 World Background: The world is well built. It's based on urban fantasy. The use of fantasy in a modern world is so fitting. 5/5 Overall: A well written novel, although still at the early stages. 5/5
Recreational, suggestive, historical ... A collection of paranormal beings and with THEORY, included "The Ecto Species Theory" You learn to create imaginary worlds but at the same time real. A Good Writer - Best Reader. Review?
This story is intriguing, a very constant view when it comes from its initial and middle plots. The writing skill of the author is excellent. Very good use of punctuations, paragraphing and volume in detail. From a first time stand point, this story is very eye-catching from the start lifting a very exciting and happy tone to its readers. The stability of updates are also reasonable good, even if there iss some gaps in between, the detail in story levels up to it. Character designs are pretty good, fitting for the story. Each have their own proposition in plot and makes up to it with its consistent personality, attitude and relations of the other characters involved. Very awesome world background, being it rather a horror based of nightly fronts.
The author does an excellent job describing the story. Lol, I am the imaginative type and I can imagine most of the things the author describe. The plot is interesting too and I cannot wait for more.
The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far 😍
First I can't critique grammars cause English is not my mother tongue and second <3 I am not the kind of a fan of this genre hahaha cause I am scared of dark themes especially horrors but I like it is a good read I just read the small part I couldn't go on for I am not a fan of this genre hahaha XD anyway more ink to your pen author-nim good job on your first story <3
I literally felt the chills when I was reading this story. You surely have a way around horror that makes it feel real. I can't wait for to read more chapters!!!
This story is amazing! I only read the first chapters and i can easily tell that this story has potential. Even the plot is interesting, and i can tell that this story is detailed and gives you chills, as i am myself a fan of thriller! Consider me hooked!
Great three chapters! Nicely written descriptions... The created world is interesting... You're doing good job! I will come back in a few day to see how are doing. I wish you an inspiration and a lot of great ideas ;)
Oh man, this novel is very entertaining to read albeit three chapters, it was a unique plot indeed. I wondering how the story will. go and looking forward to it. Good luck
Wow.. This book is very well written, the flow of words and the descriptions are superb. The plot and the story sounds really interesting and thrilling. The new ideas and the wonders would pop in our minds also. Thanks author for writing this one. I would keep this book. Great job!👏👏👏👏👏
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Hello this is brandon gould the writter of the Tylingariea Epic i am responding to a review swap I very much enjoy this book it is very well written and i like the concept. it is very well paced and i would love to see more chapters of this book. i will be sure to read them if there are more of this book. the way the chartors are decspied makes each of them feel unique and from the prologue i could get a sense of what the world was like that you created good job