Ellie's Dream
I woke up in a strange hospital with none of my memories.
This queen asked me to become an operator agent in a high tech city.
She tells me to use this thing called “Aura” but I don’t know how.
Whenever I’m alone, this man who looks like me talks to me.
I ended up passing the operator test and joining this cute girl and her dad in a team.
I started my first mission while gaining some of my memories back.
The same man is standing before me asking for my help.
He says “Time is distorted. My timeline is ruined because of me.”
What timeline is he talking about?
How many timelines has there been?
He says “You are my last hope.”
But what the hell does that have to do with me?
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Characters seemed very interesting & intriguing, would like to know more about the world around the main character. The concept of aura is also something you can dive deep into & really flesh out into an interesting magic system, with concrete rules & limitations. Would love to see it explained more before it becomes a central focus to the story. Not bad for your first two chapters.
I love this artical, i want you to take your time and read this, because the time and effort put into this artical. IN my own words im just gonna say the graphics are good and so is the grammar and figure of speech. I love this and i hope you do too. Jeremiah.H
Can't wait to see the story progress and show its full potential as chapters go by! I'm also excited to keep on working with you for the overall story art content! :D