Mafia Baby
Author: maddieshirrel
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PLEASE RATE MY NOVEL, AND GIVE ME FEED BACK SO I WILL KNOW WHAT TO FIX,AND TO HELP ME WITH MY WRITING. THANK-YOU my linktree. ( ).
(WHEN I COMPLETE THIS STORY I WILL FIX ALL THE MISS/MISS SPELLING) You move to a new town (New York). on your night off you go to a club. you meet this gorgeous man with blue eyes and black hair. he has tattoos every where. and piercing on his eye brow. you guys have a one night stand and you leave in the morning. what happens when you bump into each other 2 years later?.. and you have 2 year old twins. but you already know who he is, but you have a secret that know body knows except 1 person. will he find out who u really/used are. read to find out.to find out.
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This is my first novel. I spend a lot of time writing it .it has all the genres I love in one book. it has a lot of stuff happening and it not even the begining.
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I absolutely love your entire plot line😍❤.... I think the story is great, the leads are brilliant, the panning out of chapters is nice.👍 But I have issues with the your writing style. I like that your sentences don't have all the drama and excessive length, and are instead neat and brief.... But you really have to proof-read your work again cause at times your sentences come off as abrupt and hasty. Biggest point, make sure you spell the Lead protagonist name correctly; do spell checks, pronoun placement checks, re-punctuation of phrases as well as tenses. Biggest shock was seeing a beautiful book not being voted for ....Author I think youyour work is amazing ❤😍😘🔥🤩🤤 I hoe this book truly gets all the exposure it deserves 👍
I loved the way story unfolds. The synopsis gets you hooked and once you start reading the book, you can't put it down. Highly recommend.
i love the book so far granddaughter. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love the plot and how you write the story. As I read the synopsis, I got excited suddenly. Keep it up, miss! You have potential! Keep updating the book.
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Great book to read! The author has done a great job writing this book...even though it's her first book she has written well...I loved the characters and the plot line. great job! and best of luck.
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I love it. It is as per readers' point of view, which is to my view, extremely satisfying. I don't know what's with me and powerful evil mafia boy, but I like him, a character that will be sure to get a grip in your heart.