THE BIG THREE (Danmachi)

Shameless criticism of the author, my story is not perfect, but I will try my best to be at least fun for the reader, in this story I will try to work on the development of the main and secondary characters, do not expect the protagonist to be an OP god at the beginning , I want the increase in strength to be gradual and constant, I am also planning to help the characters of the family that the MC enters to become stronger, I honestly do not like stories where the companions of the MC can only watch while he is OPNESS, really frustrating. WITHOUT HAREM, at the MAXIMUM two companions, I haven't decided the pair yet, but we will see this throughout history, I think these are the initial considerations, again I hope you like it, without any destructive comments if you can, I just do it for fun. Until the next chapter. ; )

the novel has potential there are few novels that appear isekai with family and also he has powers of hxh that I liked 10/10 harem xdxdxd good novel Reading this novel

I found it very good because it brings several anime references that I like and shows a very original thing about an isekai with brothers. I will wait for more chapters!!

Hey, hey, I will give you an advices. First take your time to write and make sure no grammar in dialogue, monologue or anything no need to be perfect but try make as less as possible and published it. Second study more at how to make good conversation. Look you story is good, well good enough for me, what make it bad is your grammar. It's advices you free to take it or throw it.

A good story with a huge potential what I would like is for you to polish your writing such as grammatical mistakes, gender classification, and others. If you can do that it'll be great.....

Looks pretty good, from a glance even with the few chapters it seems very entertaining. Would love see the future of this. Either way from my view point looks like good concept would love to support it and help more people get to see this. Its very...

creative history, it is difficult to see stories with more than one MC on this site, it has very creative references, even though English is not the best, it is not the first language of the author, I am looking forward to the future of history, waiting for the next chapters.

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Well written, but dropped before it could actually begin. If this fic continues then I recommend reading it but otherwise don't bother.......

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