The dialogue is great and is well written. Even without dialogue tags, it is easy to tell who is talking.
[Insert obligatory grammar snark here.]
The author has talent writing. The story will improve greatly with some grammar improvements and longer chapters.
4 years ago
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Blaq_Anna
wow like wow 😙😋😍😘😉😋😊😊 it's good but like uh there should be an improvement but I like it much make sense lik....... 😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗🤗🤗😘
The dialogue is great and is well written. Even without dialogue tags, it is easy to tell who is talking. [Insert obligatory grammar snark here.] The author has talent writing. The story will improve greatly with some grammar improvements and longer chapters.
wow like wow 😙😋😍😘😉😋😊😊 it's good but like uh there should be an improvement but I like it much make sense lik....... 😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗🤗🤗😘