She's not an ordinary nerd, she's cold, smart, brutal but kind, plus she's the only nerd that have a servant totally different from other nerds they encounter. She gets bullied because a lot of student envied her.

Let's meet Zacariah Zayden Frost the badass hot model that disguise herself as a poor ugly nerd girl.

Not An Ordinary Nerd

I haven't read it yet and I'm only giving a review to ask the author what the tags are... hi author I hope you can answer my question... I'm only giving a review this long due to the word lower limit

Dear Author.

you have done a amazing job on this book. and I have few complaints. but I will give you this tip.

actions speak louder than words.

what i mean by this is simple, all of you writing has to be clear. If a reader even for a second gets confused it can become very hard to get back on track. 

for example this is from you story.

"stop talking about them!" Ryker suddenly react and walk out. 

there are several problems here but, the most glaring one is lack of context. How did he react? was it sadly, or was he mad? or could he just be annoyed. if you can start putting emotions into you characters  you create a emotional connection between your characters and your readers. and if your readers are emotionally attracted to the story they will read to find out more about the characters they love.

what I'm trying to say is that this story. no matter how good the plot is you will never make me cry. you will never make me want the protagonist to win. you will never touch me deep down. 

sorry for being blunt but it's true. look writing isn't easy. but if you don't look after the little details you book WILL die. I love this story and hate to see that before it had a chance. 

for some additional help watch overly sarcastic products' trope talks they are so help full. (I would watch the one about Mary sue first)

again sorry for being blunt it's late at night and I can barely type so this will have many mistakes in the text deal with it. please

Hi author! you never failed to make me laugh but not in a bad way HAHAHA. The characters are so cute and stupid that's why they make me laugh. it happen that I saw your book in manggatoon and finish reading it there. why did you end it so soon author? I want more, I want to know who she choose. is there a book 2? 😁

I encountered this story in wattpad today while looking for stories to read and when I read the 11 chapters available there I looked for a different app with more chapter and found it in webnovel. I really love the story. It's very interesting.

The idea is original but while usually i dont really care about grammar and punctuation,the sentences structuring makes it hard to read and immerse yourself in the story. But the biggest downside for me, and thats a personal opinion, is that your first few chapters should only be about the mc, yet all 4 of the first chapters have different 1rst person povs wich is one of the things i dislike the most since i like to immerse myself in the mc and i dont have split personalities.


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