The Mafia Lovers
Author: Novelistlor
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After being left by everyone,after being all alone in this world where the stronger survives and not lives,after tripping with all of these obstacles and living with misery and problems instead of a family who protects me.
I decided it was time to be strong and stand on my feet all alone. I knew i did not need anyone. But after 7years of being left by everyone. He came back "my grandpa" came back after leaving me ,but why? Was i in trouble? Did he really leave me for my own good?
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Hey! Nice reading! You have to take a look at this book!! The storyline is great but found minor errors but it's not enough reason for you not read it! Keep it up author, I know you can do it!! 😁😁
Hi this is the author! Hope you all love this book. This is my first romance story ever. Hope to see support from you guys. I really want to thank webnovel editors for this incredible chance!
This is an honest review...The storyline is interesting but the incidents happen too frequently and characters are introduced quickly hence no time is given for a character to be developed further. I would say that you should have taken Kai and Kylie's relationship slowly and with some heartwarming incidents. And the adoption should happen at the end of the book..... I would say that the author has potential but hasn't discovered her true talent yet so try harder. Some points keep in mind: 1. Please describe the outlook and personality of the character. 2. Give some time for the characters to fully understand each other. 3. use Grammarly to avoid errors. Enjoyed reading.....best of luck lol fatima