▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆
- Some time names are mixed and confused gender sentences (like when MC meats FMC it keeps referring as ''the young man'') and some acceptable grammatical mistakes
▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆
- at now daily update but if you update 3 chap in one week it will be suffice
▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆
- I found it quite smoothly going
▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆
- a hot-headed MC. I was going to give it 4 ☆ but in chap11 his suicidal tendency needs to tone down. I'm a little disappointed in it
▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆
-It needs some work in my opinion, but you did a good job on it till now...
Reading Status: C11
The total score
4.0
3 years ago
8
ShatteredMusic
The premise of the story along with the writing quality is good, It may not seem like the story is short since it only has 8 chapters, however the author makes sure each chapter is extremely long. (at least when comparing to a lot of other web novels.) Thank you Author
3 years ago
7
NeonPLay250
just blood from the eyes. The writing quality is as bad as it gets. this is terrible. The idea is good but the execution just sucks. Correct the grammar/translation. I wanted to read but the main idea is lost.
3 years ago
6
Br4tsch
not recomended many inconsistencies kinda every chapter.
Bad writting
and kinda dumb Mc
the first few chapter where enjoyable but ca. at the chapter 10 mark i had to force myself to continue.
3 years ago
4
Atom_Guy
This is really fun to read, how is it not more famous. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
3 years ago
4
skysiam
a good read love this Novel thanks for good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
3 years ago
2
James_Blake
The idea of this story is great but the writing Quality Kinda ruins it I was barely Able to get through 6 chapters Because the wrong ting QuaLity made it feel like I had to force my self to keep going and that just made it so I couldn’t Enjoy Reading it
3 years ago
1
SAURON_
extremely good just wish you gave a picture of all important characters and maybe even a side story where mc meets parents again you can either kill them or allow mc to forgive them but not care about them also please make a way for mc to seal the demon inside his wife.
3 years ago
1
iQuazza
Are you gonna continue this fanfic or did you drop.
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3 years ago
0
greedy_reader17
good
3 years ago
0
GloryForAll
Its a good story with a good background and concept. Has many grammar, naming, and development issues though. It could use a rewrite, but still a good read. Easily a 5 star if those issues could be toned down.
3 years ago
0
SAURON_
please allow Sora or Mc gain broly bloodline or even chumber bloodline so he has a evolved form of super-sayjin.
check comments chapter 38 for more information on idea's
3 years ago
0
dope_is_my_name
The author just copy and pasted top tier providence at the beginning I mean it’s a little better now but it still has elements from top tier providence
3 years ago
0
ZHODIAXK
Actually this is really good, it's just that at the beginning it feels like reading another novel, very similar in terms of the initial plot, I don't know in the future I can only hope for something new.
3 years ago
0
NiklasXY
extremly good, super long chapters, we need to get this fic a rating. need to fill in the rest of the nescessary words. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆ - Some time names are mixed and confused gender sentences (like when MC meats FMC it keeps referring as ''the young man'') and some acceptable grammatical mistakes ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ - at now daily update but if you update 3 chap in one week it will be suffice ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - I found it quite smoothly going ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆ - a hot-headed MC. I was going to give it 4 ☆ but in chap11 his suicidal tendency needs to tone down. I'm a little disappointed in it ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆ -It needs some work in my opinion, but you did a good job on it till now... Reading Status: C11 The total score 4.0
The premise of the story along with the writing quality is good, It may not seem like the story is short since it only has 8 chapters, however the author makes sure each chapter is extremely long. (at least when comparing to a lot of other web novels.) Thank you Author
just blood from the eyes. The writing quality is as bad as it gets. this is terrible. The idea is good but the execution just sucks. Correct the grammar/translation. I wanted to read but the main idea is lost.
not recomended many inconsistencies kinda every chapter. Bad writting and kinda dumb Mc the first few chapter where enjoyable but ca. at the chapter 10 mark i had to force myself to continue.
This is really fun to read, how is it not more famous. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
a good read love this Novel thanks for good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The idea of this story is great but the writing Quality Kinda ruins it I was barely Able to get through 6 chapters Because the wrong ting QuaLity made it feel like I had to force my self to keep going and that just made it so I couldn’t Enjoy Reading it
extremely good just wish you gave a picture of all important characters and maybe even a side story where mc meets parents again you can either kill them or allow mc to forgive them but not care about them also please make a way for mc to seal the demon inside his wife.
Are you gonna continue this fanfic or did you drop. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
good
Its a good story with a good background and concept. Has many grammar, naming, and development issues though. It could use a rewrite, but still a good read. Easily a 5 star if those issues could be toned down.
please allow Sora or Mc gain broly bloodline or even chumber bloodline so he has a evolved form of super-sayjin. check comments chapter 38 for more information on idea's
The author just copy and pasted top tier providence at the beginning I mean it’s a little better now but it still has elements from top tier providence
Actually this is really good, it's just that at the beginning it feels like reading another novel, very similar in terms of the initial plot, I don't know in the future I can only hope for something new.
extremly good, super long chapters, we need to get this fic a rating. need to fill in the rest of the nescessary words. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee