It's really good, I'm looking forward to reading more ❤but make longer chapters and there are things you should work on but for it being ur first book it's really good.
4 years ago
5
Baatso
You don’t wanna miss out🥺🤝I won’t say anything but someone is cutting onions 🙇♀️
So will relate with the characters while others will find connection with them ...
Try and paint a picture for yourself
It's really good, I'm looking forward to reading more ❤but make longer chapters and there are things you should work on but for it being ur first book it's really good.
You don’t wanna miss out🥺🤝I won’t say anything but someone is cutting onions 🙇♀️ So will relate with the characters while others will find connection with them ... Try and paint a picture for yourself