more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
4 years ago
1
Slothiticus
Poorly written with very short chapter half of which are just system stat updates. was really excited to see a viking system novel until I started trying to read it.
4 years ago
1
RyanPe
Writing has definitely gotten better but some lines don't make sense other than that you're doing well. I hope you continue to make more chapters.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Poorly written with very short chapter half of which are just system stat updates. was really excited to see a viking system novel until I started trying to read it.
Writing has definitely gotten better but some lines don't make sense other than that you're doing well. I hope you continue to make more chapters.